Derby #193: Catchy Slogans for Everyday Products
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Xtremely Refreshing Water ... in a bottle

Xtremely Refreshing Water ... in a bottle
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dohboy182


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rasabi


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Full text: Xtremely Refreshing Water ... in a Bottle

Same water as your tap, but in a bottle

3 color on Asphalt. Design is centered and pushed to the top of printing area on shirt.

Any suggestions welcome! I will post better details a little later of half tones and other stuff.

Thanks for looking!

megsck


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awesome styling, love the roughness of it. =)

mrwednesday


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Very nicely done. However, I will caution against black on asphalt. It can be near invisible at times. You might just end up seeing the red and white parts from a distance and have no context for the design till you get closer.

Leahbh


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mrwednesday wrote:Very nicely done. However, I will caution against black on asphalt. It can be near invisible at times. You might just end up seeing the red and white parts from a distance and have no context for the design till you get closer.


If you decide to change the color, I love heather gray!! i might be the only one though.

rasabi


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mrwednesday wrote:Very nicely done. However, I will caution against black on asphalt. It can be near invisible at times. You might just end up seeing the red and white parts from a distance and have no context for the design till you get closer.


Thanks for the feedback! I'll take a look at different colors when I'm off work. I originally settled on the darks just to make the lasers pop a bit more, but I was thinking the blacks didn't have enough contrast.

I'll probably try red and heather gray, but if anyone else has some color ideas feel free to type them super loud to get my attention.

sawhite79


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Looks like someone saw Jonathan Coulton at PAX East this year.

Cantatus


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Great design, but the text at the bottom is a little hard to decipher. I kept reading "same" as "save".

Lish64


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I love the subject choices you have for the extremeness of the shirt.

rasabi


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I'm going to have to wait to resubmit later tonight anyway, so I figured I'd throw up some color schemes. I also fixed the M on the bottom and did some other random tweaks. Someday I'll be ready when the derby starts :P.

I also took a look at my wife's No One Left to Play with shirt and it seems like the blacks on asphalt would be okay. I also found this old post

ramyb wrote:I did a bit of searching on the forums and found some images that people posted of themselves wearing other shirts that have black/dark colors on asphalt
1.2.3
Hope that helps


Anyway, the linkys for the colors:

Asphalt


Baby Blue


Red


Heather


Thanks to everyone for all the great feedback! I think I'm getting better at setting up my files anyway...

studio1172


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This is my favorite design of the derby!

deiden26


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I vote for putting it on a red shirt

jb2colorado


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congratulations on being awesome.

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