Derby #196: Amusement Parks
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When Sparks Fly

When Sparks Fly
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djtheatre


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hey everyone. thanks for the help in the pre-derby... i may do a resub with other fireworks later. thanks for checking it out.

backliteyes


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I got distracted from the content by the honeycombs on the ground. Watch out, your proposal is about to be ruined by giant bees!!

novastarj


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backliteyes wrote:I got distracted from the content by the honeycombs on the ground. Watch out, your proposal is about to be ruined by giant bees!!


I agree actually, I think the floor is distracting... you have these excellent silhouettes of the couple and the castle, but the floor actually has a pattern. The silhouettes I think get lost a little between the brightness of the fireworks and the floor.

Maybe it's just me...

funnytoad


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Maybe if you used different color hexagons, instead of outlines that make hexagons? then it wouldnt make me look at the floor, or maybe just a more muted color.

SnowQueenVT


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Very pretty DJ, I love how it came out!!

http://www.wix.com/scottgreenip/snowqueenvt

georg4man


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For the most part I like the idea of fireworks, but the two exploding fireworks look strange and I'm not convinced that people often get married at the carnival. Maybe it's just me though.

sTyLeS


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georg4man wrote:For the most part I like the idea of fireworks, but the two exploding fireworks look strange and I'm not convinced that people often get married at the carnival. Maybe it's just me though.


Pretty sure it's not a carnival. The theme this week is Amusement Parks. And with the castle in the background, it's more likely supposed to be a Disney themed park (or a nondescript version thereof), which people quite often do propose at, and get married at.

djtheatre


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Hey everyone. Thanks for all the fun feedback. If I had more time this week I'd do a re-sub, but alas... life.

However, just in a quick justification, I designed this because this is how I proposed to my wife 2 years ago on new years eve. We live in orlando, so yes it's more of a disney themed type amusement park. This was one of those "special to me designs" so I thank you for voting and saying that it looked cool.

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