Derby #197: Royalty

The Queen of Hearts

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mattcom


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Uh ohz, something tells me the "Q" isnt going to pass the rejectionator...

fairnymph


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What a beautiful design...which alas, I could never wear (and thus cannot vote for), as it is sadly on cream. Maybe consider submitting on another background colour? White would definitely work, and provide more contrast allowing the design (especially the red) to 'pop' more vividly.

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FullTangHalo


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+1 on the change to a white shirt.

hookajoe


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This is fantastic! But Mattcom's right, the Q's going to get it rejected.

Maybe replace the Qs with crowns?

And I say keep the cream!

mattcom


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fairnymph wrote:What a beautiful design...which alas, I could never wear (and thus cannot vote for), as it is sadly on cream. Maybe consider submitting on another background colour? White would definitely work, and provide more contrast allowing the design (especially the red) to 'pop' more vividly.


Excellent feedback is excellent :D

So, assuming this version will get shut down by rejectimus prime and taking into account said excellent feedback i prepared this:

http://shirt.woot.com/Derby/Entry.aspx?id=52526

mattcom


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Re: The Queen of Hearts V2


Added some tweaks to the design in anticipation of a rejector-beam attack and threw it on a different shirt color, hopefully you enjoy! =)



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