Derby #197: Royalty

King-ky...

Uh... no

Rejected because: Uh... no

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Mavyn


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Re: King-ky...


Funny, but the hand on the bottom king is backwards. Or upside down. Not right, anyway.


My speech is not parsing. I am speaking in ellipsis.

creativehack


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Mavyn wrote:Funny, but the hand on the bottom king is backwards. Or upside down. Not right, anyway.


The hans is in the correct orrientation, but my drawing skills may not have been up to the task. That hand is supposed to show the palm facing out (as if to push away) with the wrist turned back and the thumb down.

Thanks for taking the time to critique it, feedback always helps!

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Mavyn


quality posts: 22 Private Messages Mavyn
creativehack wrote:The hans is in the correct orrientation, but my drawing skills may not have been up to the task. That hand is supposed to show the palm facing out (as if to push away) with the wrist turned back and the thumb down.

Thanks for taking the time to critique it, feedback always helps!


I think the issue is that it looks too flat. To be in that position, it needs to show perspective-shorter fingers and palm rather than looking like the back of the hand is flush against him.

My speech is not parsing. I am speaking in ellipsis.

creativehack


quality posts: 29 Private Messages creativehack
Re: King-ky...


Wow, I didn't even see the Rejectionater coming on this one

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popyea


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Re: King-ky...


rejectionator is being a prick this week.

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