Derby #200: The Silver Screen
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Whisper

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DianaSprinkle


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I'm sure I'm not seeing this design the way I should be seeing it. The shapes are confusing.
I keep seeing a profile of a thin neck, long chin, cartoon image of a man staring at a girl's profile... =/

creativehack


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DianaSprinkle wrote:I'm sure I'm not seeing this design the way I should be seeing it. The shapes are confusing.
I keep seeing a profile of a thin neck, long chin, cartoon image of a man staring at a girl's profile... =/


Hand holding cigarette in foreground, mans face turned toward viewer (left white space is his cheek), woman is whispering into his ear

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DianaSprinkle


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creativehack wrote:Hand holding cigarette in foreground, mans face turned toward viewer (left white space is his cheek), woman is whispering into his ear


LOL. I see, however, my brain still fights me.

katrinabean86


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DianaSprinkle wrote:LOL. I see, however, my brain still fights me.


Agreed. I think it's the weird dark part at the bottom of his face. It isn't quite defined enough. The ear is easy to pick out once you see that's what it is.

Bunnyko


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i'm having a hard time seeing it as well. i see the woman, and a hand, but the rest of it is confusing.

j5


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I'm with Diana, I can't unsee the thin necked pointy chinned mustachioed man in a top-hat and glasses.

Otherwise , the man has no right shoulder.
Nice idea though.

move along

cwendauthi


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This design is so awesome and on-theme. I agree, though, that the man facing out could use more definition, maybe by highlighting the collar or hat more? Tweak and resubmit maybe?

roofoo


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Yes, this design is hurting my brain just trying to figure out what I'm looking at. :P

junkilo


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interesting! would spread too much brain hurt even though its chic

CrystallineX


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I think it was intended. =_= for example...

If it were to print as a poster, I would think about it... =/ I don't want to promote smoking.

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