Derby #202: Anthropomorphic Food
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Doughnut Lobotomy

Doughnut Lobotomy
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patrickspens


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It's National Doughnut Day!!!

kender42


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patrickspens wrote:It's National Doughnut Day!!!


Don't I already have this shirt? ....oh I see this time he has a brain in a jar. (Doughnut Panic!)

DianaSprinkle


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Ha ha ha ha I really like this one... Not sure if it needs the text though. This is a really clever use of the donut hole.

Spiritgreen


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Mental, but charming all the same. :D

KIDA26


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This made me laugh out loud at my desk. therefore it gets a vote. well done!

novastarj


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I like it, except for the text... seems unnecessary.

chumpmagic


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What the name of the font? Or is it custom? I like it.

Also, awesome design. Hope this prints because I always favor the original, pop-culture free designs, and I really like it! It is pretty darn clever.


bottlehed


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Haha, awesome work as usual! Not sure why you included the text though, I think it would work well enough without too.

JenXer74


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The mouth froth puts it over the top. *GMV*

lilaviel


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I love it. It's clever and funny.

Coffeesloth


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Johndis5 wrote:Have you seen this?

http://shirt.woot.com/friends.aspx?k=6727

The right side of both shirts is pretty damn similar.


I disagree, its not that similar...

BambooDrew


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Johndis5 wrote:Have you seen this?

http://shirt.woot.com/friends.aspx?k=6727

The right side of both shirts is pretty damn similar.


yet two different ideas.

paigeg


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Nice. I'm always jumping the fence with your stuff - love/hate thing. This is cute, funny, somewhat disturbing. Perfect. And while it's reminiscent of Donut Panic, I consider that more of an homage, or even chance resemblance. It is Dougnut Day, after all - why wouldn't it come to mind? I have to agree that the text seems unnecessary. The brain/donut hole in the jar seems to do it.

stella0930


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This reminds me of the movie "Cold Soul"...

laggyg


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I'm with all the others in this topic saying that the text kills it for me. I LOVE the design, but I feel it's clear enough without an explanation attached...resub please please please? =)

lodestone2004


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I would like this better without the text as the joke is better if it is only implied.

shellsandoval


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Absolutely brilliant. No wonder they taste different with a hole!

cmdixon2


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The text absolutely ruins this one. Takes it that last little step from a Woot shirt to a WalMart shirt. Sometimes that "no-text" rule is a blessing.

qwasdfz


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Partrickspens. I have loved almost every single one of your designs to death and own 4 of your shirts and I have to say... this is crap. Sorry but it's a recycled concept, it's not that amusing and the text just kills what little else it had going for it. Sorry Patrick. I look forward to your great entry in the next derby.

sgreenip


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PatrickSpence, did you create the shirt template yourself, or did you download it from somewhere. Because I have been searchin' and searchin'. And I got nothin'.

zombiegenocide


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patrickspens wrote:It's National Doughnut Day!!!


I really like the idea of this shirt, but I would not wear this one with the text, so it does not get my vote.

SirGecko


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Like others have said I like this shirt but wouldn't buy it unless the text was dropped. Drop the text and I'd buy it. I'd buy it so hard.

ArdillaCiega


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qwasdfz wrote:Partrickspens. I have loved almost every single one of your designs to death and own 4 of your shirts and I have to say... this is crap. Sorry but it's a recycled concept, it's not that amusing and the text just kills what little else it had going for it. Sorry Patrick. I look forward to your great entry in the next derby.


I couldn't agree more. I was clicking on thumbnails to see which was Patrick's entry this week. I almost didn't bother clicking on this one 'cause I thought there was no way it could be his. Oh well... there's always next week.

Even a blind squirrel is right twice a day.

roxy86


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No text please!, kills everything!

elwayman02


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I agree with most of the above, get rid of the text and it'd be much better.

whoohoo01


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Love it! GMV

Hectic


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Really liked this design like most of your designs patrick...except for the text. I thought it was just the title for the design, but not actually in the design until I looked closer. I would like to get this one, but if the text is printed along with the rest of the design, I'll think twice about it.

PittViking


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Okay, I laughed pretty hard when I saw this picture. Best of luck to you!

Itzpyd4


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Want one with no text.

Icy13


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Itzpyd4 wrote:Want one with no text.


In for one with no text. PLease. This will go perfectly with my Donut Panic, and that donut needs a friend.

But donuts cannot read, so no text Please woot, let it happen.

I was born and raised in Plano, any help for hometown cred?

jmmbell1987


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cmdixon2 wrote:The text absolutely ruins this one. Takes it that last little step from a Woot shirt to a WalMart shirt. Sometimes that "no-text" rule is a blessing.


Couldn't agree more here. I saw the thumbnail and thought it might be one of your better designs. The text murders the shirt. "Show, don't tell" often works with shirts too.

melebeth


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patrickspens wrote:It's National Doughnut Day!!!


If this were just the donut in the thumbnail, no pink donut, no text, I'd buy it in a heartbeat.

rskelhorn


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This is great, how do I vote?

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