Derby #203: Red
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red dawn

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kevincrimi


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Re: red dawn


I really like the tree/sunset idea but I think it would have come across a lot better on the shirt if you faded out the black instead of it just cutting off at the printable area borders. Just my opinion


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batman8001


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kevincrimi wrote:I really like the tree/sunset idea but I think it would have come across a lot better on the shirt if you faded out the black instead of it just cutting off at the printable area borders. Just my opinion


I second that statement.

killerorca


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kevincrimi wrote:I really like the tree/sunset idea but I think it would have come across a lot better on the shirt if you faded out the black instead of it just cutting off at the printable area borders. Just my opinion


I third this opinion.

thewronggrape


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Re: red dawn


The previous three comments reflect exactly what I was going to write about this.

Clicked on this because I loved the thumbnail. Saw the black box and I reflexively cringed.

llandar


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Re: red dawn


Agree with everyone else. I would suggest just letting where the trees meet the ground be the bottom of the design. The box is clunky.

gimmethatplz


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Re: red dawn


Dump the black box.

fairnymph


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kevincrimi wrote:I really like the tree/sunset idea but I think it would have come across a lot better on the shirt if you faded out the black instead of it just cutting off at the printable area borders. Just my opinion


Completely agree - the blocky/posteresque bottom corners ruin this otherwise dramatically beautiful design.

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laggyg


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Re: red dawn


I'm with all the other posts saying to lose the box, but I propose a different method of losing it. Make the design on a black shirt, and have the red sky fade into the shirt...almost like the light of dawn fades into the real sky.

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