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the pen is mightier than the sword -resub / revote

the pen is mightier than the sword -resub / revote
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blackwhite


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Re: the pen is mightier than the sword -resub / revote


IF YOU NEED A LAUGH, PLEASE READ BELOW!

This is a resub due to my wonderful wife catching my misspelling in the word "mightier", ha ha! Told you she had a fast red pen.

PLEASE REVOTE, THANKS!
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freshalacrity wrote:Awesome idea! Any way you can make the words look like they're floating in the ink more?


Thanks! Though I have to thank my wife for this idea, she's a writer. She loves stories with dragons,fantasy,etc. After reading my response, she's probably getting her red pen out, ouch! fastest editor in the east, ha ha.

I probably should have put a shadow under the letters. Thanks for the input.

taylertot


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Very beautiful design! Might be more writing than reading, but I think it still works!

AnnaJo


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Great color choices and I love the large graphic placement with the pen anchoring the center of the design.

fluchtpunkt


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Looks great, and I love the dragon wrapping itself around that pen!

As a potential purchaser: I'd have liked this shirt better without the text. It's not because of the phrase itself (you can find basically the same phrase in other languages, too), just I'm not fond of wearing English text in my non-English environment.

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blackwhite


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AnnaJo wrote:Great color choices and I love the large graphic placement with the pen anchoring the center of the design.


Thanks, I appreciate the positive feedback!

blackwhite


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fluchtpunkt wrote:Looks great, and I love the dragon wrapping itself around that pen!

As a potential purchaser: I'd have liked this shirt better without the text. It's not because of the phrase itself (you can find basically the same phrase in other languages, too), just I'm not fond of wearing English text in my non-English environment.


That's understandable, I hope that the design far out powers the text. I thought of the texts as more of a small second point of interest.

Thanks for the feed back.

laggyg


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I'm a sucker for anything with a dragon on it, but I think it would have looked better if the text flowed a little...like it was oozing around in the ink, maybe a little swirly coming off (or pushing in) and breaking the barriers of the text a bit. Very nice looking dragon though, so GMV for sure!

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