Derby #204: I ❤ Books!
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Into the Wild (Silver)

Into the Wild (Silver)
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phineus


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Still inspired by Jon Krakauer's Into the Wild. Only this time, one color on silver.

ochopika


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This is pretty! I'd wear it. The negative space between the trees makes a great pattern, and the subject matter is cool.

I'd just try to make the gradients (they look like gradients at least) in the background more blended and smoother.

laggyg


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Either the mountains need to go, or need to become more "sketchy" like the trees are to fit the image. They sort of distract me. But still GMV because...well, what she said:

ochopika wrote:This is pretty! I'd wear it. The negative space between the trees makes a great pattern, and the subject matter is cool.

phineus


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Thanks for the compliments and suggestions! Would love to work off of your critiques, but I don't think a resub is worthwhile at this point, even though this isn't doing quite as well as I had hoped...

ochopika


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phineus wrote:Thanks for the compliments and suggestions! Would love to work off of your critiques, but I don't think a resub is worthwhile at this point, even though this isn't doing quite as well as I had hoped...


Its okay, just keep submitting things each week!

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