Derby #208: Four
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Four Corners

Four Corners
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ochopika


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Hello, I was playing with halftones and I made this. It will probably work, if not... oh well! It was fun.

gayemeyer


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I like the little ship falling off the earth.

almsforoblivion


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Very nice design! GMV.

muhammadajalal


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Nice idea, but the clouds are overwhelming in this picture. Why not shift the clouds up a bit so you can still see the land, but the picture remains flat? It'd make more sense.

ochopika


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muhammadajalal wrote:Nice idea, but the clouds are overwhelming in this picture. Why not shift the clouds up a bit so you can still see the land, but the picture remains flat? It'd make more sense.


hmm yesh, I had so much fun with the clouds that I went crazy with them! I could also fix a few other things with this one, maybe I will. I'm not totally solid with this derby... numbers just don't inspire me very much for some reason.

dijay


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Awesome.+1

laggyg


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I agree with everyone else...the little ship is an awesome touch. Perhaps more oddities like that could liven it up a bit? And I agree, the clouds are a bit much but I like how you did them...maybe also have some water falling off the edge not just the clouds? My 2 cents, take it or leave it =P

paigeg


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Take THAT, Terry Pratchett - the world is square!
I dunno, if you wanted a more realiztic look, pulling the clouds up off the plane would work better. But I kinda like the fuzzy feel of the way it comes together.

ochopika


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paigeg wrote:Take THAT, Terry Pratchett - the world is square!
I dunno, if you wanted a more realiztic look, pulling the clouds up off the plane would work better. But I kinda like the fuzzy feel of the way it comes together.


thanks paige and laggy, I think will come back to this design later for some other reason. Adding more things to the world would be great! I can try to make the clouds float above the earth more as well.

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