Derby #209: Fairy Tales
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The Seven Ravens

The Seven Ravens
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seedsofsedition


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Thank you everyone for your feedback this week!

You can read the Grimms tale it was based on here: http://www.familymanagement.com/literacy/grimms/grimms19.html

and as always, any feedback for the future is appreciated!

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runnerfrog13


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The raven in her hand looks like a punk raven with a nose ring ;)

Anyway, this turned out nice! The one thing that distracts me is the lines on her tank top. I would probably go with a solid color

seedsofsedition


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runnerfrog13 wrote:The raven in her hand looks like a punk raven with a nose ring ;)

Anyway, this turned out nice! The one thing that distracts me is the lines on her tank top. I would probably go with a solid color


Yeah, he kinda does look like he has a septum ring. He is just extra cool. ;]

I kinda ran out of colors and all the solids were really distracting, would a different style of halftone do the trick you think?

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endeszbet


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Hooray for using a fairytale not yet appropriated by Disney! I grew up reading the original Grimm's, so I appreciate this. I believe halftones may do the trick.

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