Derby #209: Fairy Tales

the origin of fairies

Non-incidental text

Rejected because: Non-incidental text

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runnerfrog13


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Re: the origin of fairies


Hahahahahahahaha. Clever, and good job setting up the punchline. Though, in the shirt comp, at first I was confused thinking your color-spots were part of the design. Quickly sorted out however. I do worry that the + and = would be considered non-incidental text.

(ps- Somehow the idea of a guy mating with a mosquito is rather disturbing)

ArdillaCiega


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runnerfrog13 wrote:Hahahahahahahaha. Clever, and good job setting up the punchline. Though, in the shirt comp, at first I was confused thinking your color-spots were part of the design. Quickly sorted out however. I do worry that the + and = would be considered non-incidental text.

(ps- Somehow the idea of a guy mating with a mosquito is rather disturbing)


I would think the "fairy" in parentheses is even more non-incidental (or less incidental).

Even a blind squirrel is right twice a day.

gement


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ArdillaCiega wrote:I would think the "fairy" in parentheses is even more non-incidental (or less incidental).


I agree, and would strongly prefer it without. It's a good enough approximation of Tinkerbell that it's stronger without words.

ApeLad


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gement wrote:I agree, and would strongly prefer it without. It's a good enough approximation of Tinkerbell that it's stronger without words.


Speaking from experience, pluses and equal signs are text too.

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