Re: [url=http://shirt.woot.com/Derby/Entry.aspx?id=55669]Here Kitty Kitty! REDRAWN

This is a resubmission!

Changes made:
Changed shirt color from cranberry to slate.
Shrank print image.
Changed cat colors, reduced total inks to 3.
Changed pointer to mouse shape.
Redrew cat to tighten him up a bit.
Shrank speech bubble, changed lettering.
Made lettering and pointer more contrasty compared to background.

Thanks!

Re: [url=http://shirt.woot.com/Derby/Entry.aspx?id=55669]Here Kitty Kitty! REDRAWN

And here's a link to a page where you can see my process on this thing:
http://wanderlane.com/content/?p=591

Re: [url=http://shirt.woot.com/Derby/Entry.aspx?id=55669]Here Kitty Kitty! REDRAWN

Much better!

ChuckleNorris wrote:Much better!

Thanks! Is the mouse still readable as the pointer? I'm probably leaving it in either way, but wanted to make sure I didn't go too abstract on that.

wanderlane wrote:Thanks! Is the mouse still readable as the pointer? I'm probably leaving it in either way, but wanted to make sure I didn't go too abstract on that.

Yeah, that definitely works well.

Re: Here Kitty Kitty! REDRAWN

Now this is amazing, very funny. wonderful, wonderful improvement!

lilygrapetree wrote:
Now this is amazing, very funny. wonderful, wonderful improvement!

Thanks, Lily!

And here's a link to a page where you can see my process on this thing:
http://wanderlane.com/content/?p=591

Re: [url=http://shirt.woot.com/Derby/Entry.aspx?id=55669]Here Kitty Kitty! REDRAWN

Wow! I'm really impressed by your updates on this.

gement wrote:Wow! I'm really impressed by your updates on this.

Thank you!

Re: [url=http://shirt.woot.com/Derby/Entry.aspx?id=55669]Here Kitty Kitty! REDRAWN

Wow! Love the updates, slate is perfect, mouse is hysterical GMV

oscaroni wrote:Wow! Love the updates, slate is perfect, mouse is hysterical GMV

Thank you!