Derby #213: Dog Days
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Gonna get that squirrel!

Gonna get that squirrel!
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Exohdus


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Actually a really neat concept, but why are their tongues green?

astrobat


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Exohdus wrote:Actually a really neat concept, but why are their tongues green?


Thanks! Because it's coool.

blinddog3d


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There's the bat! Clever, but.... the tongue? is it blue? hmmm.....

epicfal


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I love the concept, and the art, too, but I have two issues with the design: 1) the dog's tounge blends in with the sky behind it, and 2) the dog's feet blend in with the skyline, and get kind of lost.

astrobat


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Thanks for all the feedback, guys! It has been really helpful. I've decided that I will re-submit it with the tongues dark brown and the dog's boots gray. I may also give it a different thumbnail and get rid of the clouds (I can see how they might be too distracting.)

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