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Dreams of Fish

Dreams of Fish
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curli76


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Nice. I like what you did with the constellation.

shikausstan


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Thanks I thought it would look better that way.

bmoroniw


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I really like the Fish in the Sky. It looks like your halftones have improved a lot.

paigeg


quality posts: 7 Private Messages paigeg
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I like the changes you made - nice!

vstephenson


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My favorite of the bunch!

amhi


quality posts: 1 Private Messages amhi
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Beautiful, although I liked it better without the constellation! You can't please everyone....

Narfcake


quality posts: 279 Private Messages Narfcake
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GMV because it does have the constellation.

shikausstan


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Thanks, for the nice comments everyone! I appreciate the votes and comments.

amhi


quality posts: 1 Private Messages amhi
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I voted for it as well. Hope it prints. Love black cats.

fairnymph


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Love the art and concept, but the design seems a little spare/empty/lacking to me. I think adding in more stars and perhaps the neighouring constellations to either side of the fish would make this design more complete. You could also then simply brighten and perhaps slightly enlarge stars of the fish constellation so that it stands out without needing connecting lines.

And what about a Navy background shirt colour, which would make stars easier, maybe, as the stars could be half-toned in degrees of white? Just some thoughts.

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tessc


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Beautiful cat! Nice "sparkle" to the fish. Good luck!

shikausstan


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I agree there could probably been a little more stars on this, but I didn't want to detract from the main focal point (The cat and what the cat was looking at).

Thanks again for all the comments guys!

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