Derby #243: Spring into Spring!
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Spring Awakening

Spring Awakening
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JDSardone


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Wow beautiful design, I just wish it didnt look quite so square on the shirt. Maybe use the angled trees as a sort of border for a gentler transition from shirt to graphic?

amen87


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I agree. The top and sides could be blended a little better into the shirt or even do a mist pattern just so it's not so square. Other than that it's absolutely amazing! This shirt is SO beautiful!

paaiyan


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The art is great! But I agree about it looking rather squarey.

fourlane77


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...thanks for the kind words and constructive criticism...you guys are totally right...i still struggle with making the transition from what looks all right in a square box to what looks all right on a t-shirt...i overlooked this, so thanks for bringing it to my attention...if i can find time this evening i will try to fix it and resub...

cheers!

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paigeg


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I was ready to post some kind of general BOO to the dark shirt designs, since I have a personal allergy to gray. While my allergy doesn't generally extend to black, being a rocker, I would usually consider a black spring design a bad idea. Not so. This is my long-winded way of saying... Freakin' nice! The edges don't phaze me, though softer would just elevate the design. Kudos. Good stuff. LOVE that blossom.

fourlane77


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paigeg wrote:I was ready to post some kind of general BOO to the dark shirt designs, since I have a personal allergy to gray. While my allergy doesn't generally extend to black, being a rocker, I would usually consider a black spring design a bad idea. Not so. This is my long-winded way of saying... Freakin' nice! The edges don't phaze me, though softer would just elevate the design. Kudos. Good stuff. LOVE that blossom.


thanks! ..yeah, a dark shirt is sort of a gamble for this derby i guess...i'm not really the pastel or cutesy rodent type, so i tried to create something that i could be satisfied in presenting while still maintaining the integrity of the topic...

(plus, i'm a rocker too with a predominantly black wardrobe...lol)

..personally, i'm more of a fan of autumn!

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kaleidoscopicfailure


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This is phenomenal! I can't imagine the effort you put into this design, it looks so convincing. I don't mind the square composition, it makes use of the area of the shirt. Nice Work FourLane77!

meedox


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Wow. Truly stunning.

riveroffeathers


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I really like this design. However the only thing was that I feel the blossom is quite squished. I personally feel the flower vines could have been extended downward a bit and faded out. I do love the design though ^^ Very well rendered.

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