Derby #248: Art Nouveau
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Martian Nouveau

Martian Nouveau
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Zagazoo


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I really love the way you drew the martian woman, the style is simple but very clear and unique. You chose which features to emphasize well. There is a distracting tangent between the bottom of here shirt and the dome of the saucer. Since they line up at first glance I don't see the dome as being part of the saucer but rather a part of the woman. If you scale horizontally out with the dome and overlap the bottom of her shirt intersecting with the saucer I think it would solve this problem. Overall well done. The color choices are also very appealing!

vikungfu


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Zagazoo wrote:I really love the way you drew the martian woman, the style is simple but very clear and unique. You chose which features to emphasize well. There is a distracting tangent between the bottom of here shirt and the dome of the saucer. Since they line up at first glance I don't see the dome as being part of the saucer but rather a part of the woman. If you scale horizontally out with the dome and overlap the bottom of her shirt intersecting with the saucer I think it would solve this problem. Overall well done. The color choices are also very appealing!


Thanks for you kind words. You are totally right about the tangent. I guess I never noticed when working on it full size. I don't think there's enough interest to make a revised version but I greatly appreciate your critique!

spkidwell


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This is very well done. I bet it would look great on the back of the shirt. I like the way she is looking over her shoulder.

j5


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Is this Pia Zadora in Santa Clause Conquers the Martians?

move along

vikungfu


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@spkidwell Thanks, I dunno if you're able to put designs on back of shirts though?

@j5 Oh I've never seen that but you can pretend it is!

bluesplot


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Love it!!!!!!

Zagazoo


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vikungfu wrote:Thanks for you kind words. You are totally right about the tangent. I guess I never noticed when working on it full size. I don't think there's enough interest to make a revised version but I greatly appreciate your critique!


No problem, glad it helped. Really is a great image!

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