Derby #252: Three's a Crowd

WOW Three is possible

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deedlebee


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Re: WOW Three is possible


I like the concept a lot, but...

If the derby is "three's a crowd" then the message of this shirt is the exact opposite of what you're going for. You're essentially saying that purple is out of place.

The actual design looks ragged and unprofessional. Other than incorporating the rainbow, this just isn't very stylish.

capitalsown


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Not on a shirt template. Resubmit with the design on a shirt template or you will get rejected.

As for this:
deedlebee wrote:I like the concept a lot, but...

If the derby is "three's a crowd" then the message of this shirt is the exact opposite of what you're going for. You're essentially saying that purple is out of place.

The actual design looks ragged and unprofessional. Other than incorporating the rainbow, this just isn't very stylish.


I really don't think we should worry about how the design's meaning could be interpreted within the context of the derby because nobody looking at this shirt (if it wound up printing) will go "Oh, this shirt is actually unintentionally offensive because it was submitted for the 'Three's a Crowd' theme.".

As for what you are saying about the design looking ragged, I agree. If you decide to resubmit it, you might want to try rounding out those pixely edges and making those colors solid (I don't know, they might interpret those artifacts, I'm guessing, as more than 6 colors).

ihategroupon


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Re: WOW Three is possible


Designer - Can you explain what this shirt says in your opinion please? The intention of the shirt. Just curious because I'm not clear.

jabascus


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ihategroupon wrote:Designer - Can you explain what this shirt says in your opinion please? The intention of the shirt. Just curious because I'm not clear.


I'm not getting it either. I'm very curious too.

acowfrog


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Great idea. Now why don't you dress it up with some 3D rendering or something?

acowfrog


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ihategroupon wrote:Designer - Can you explain what this shirt says in your opinion please? The intention of the shirt. Just curious because I'm not clear.


I believe the artist is trying to say that gender and sex are not dichotomies.

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