Derby #258: Beauty Within
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EXTERMIN....oooh pretty

EXTERMIN....oooh pretty
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plainyoghurt


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zalameria


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plainyoghurt wrote:Hmmmm.


so either that guy has on a dress or that girl has a beard?

toby8915


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zalameria wrote:so either that guy has on a dress or that girl has a beard?


or she has pig tails.

Thirdbase9


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toby8915 wrote:or she has pig tails.


Pigtails they maybe, I didn't see them as that until I read your post, it looks like a guy with a big beard in a dress.

I don't know.

smatzke


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Thirdbase9 wrote:Pigtails they maybe, I didn't see them as that until I read your post, it looks like a guy with a big beard in a dress.


Ditto. I didn't see pigtails until it was pointed out. There is a gap in the pigtail, which makes it look like a beard.

squigglevision


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smatzke wrote:Ditto. I didn't see pigtails until it was pointed out. There is a gap in the pigtail, which makes it look like a beard.


Yeah, the same thing happened with me. And even though I know they're pigtails now, I still see it as a beard. This is especially true in the thumbnail, as her hair tie loses its detail. It's a decent design, but unfortunately it was ruined for me by this!

It would've helped if the pigtail was placed differently or the hair tie was in a more vibrant colour, rather than being white, so that it wouldn't look like a gap and would stand out more and define the shape of the hair.

rlancaster


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That guy in the dress has nice legs, but he should trim that beard.

akivaj


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zalameria wrote:so either that guy has on a dress or that girl has a beard?

That's exactly what I was thinking

-Super Crochety.

shadowschaos


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I simply adore the idea of a dalek being distracted by a flower, but it needs to be done better. The flower doesn't match at all, and the bearded girl is also, well there's just something off about her.

Yup.

Mavyn


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Yep, I'm with the others.

Pigtails are typicaly worn either over the ears, or behind them.

My speech is not parsing. I am speaking in ellipsis.

hollandgirl


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I love all things DOCTOR, but the dude in the dress is sorta 'meh'. Would be cool if it was a Cyberman or Rose perhaps in the dress.

toby8915


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hollandgirl wrote:I love all things DOCTOR, but the dude in the dress is sorta 'meh'. Would be cool if it was a Cyberman or Rose perhaps in the dress.


looks like I am gonna have to upgrade the gal's hair for another derby for this one.

j5


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toby8915 wrote:looks like I am gonna have to upgrade the gal's hair for another derby for this one.


Guessing the girl is a model here, then rendered. Problem appears to be what looked good straight on, doesn't so much when changing the pose. 3D models don't know for gravity, eh?

I have a shirt catalog, y'all!

ciaralee


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I really like the look of the Dalek, but the flower and the girl don't feel like they fit in the picture. And then there's the hair/beard issue. I like the concept, it just needs a little refining.

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