Derby #262: Gold
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Golden Peacock

Golden Peacock
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hcschmidt


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Re: Golden Peacock


I just wanted to say I know this one is a bit of a late entry, but everytime I went to do one somebody put an entry in with the same idea. Hopefully this one is different enough from the rest. I am still relatively new to this and would love any constructive critiques that you can supply. Thanks!

thatquietgir1


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hcschmidt wrote:I just wanted to say I know this one is a bit of a late entry, but everytime I went to do one somebody put an entry in with the same idea. Hopefully this one is different enough from the rest. I am still relatively new to this and would love any constructive critiques that you can supply. Thanks!


I like this! The thumbnail doesn't properly represent the design though, it looks like the head has no body. The only other suggestion I have for next time is to spend a couple minutes smoothing out some of the lines in the body so they flow better. Other than that I really like the textures and placement of the design, looks good!

hcschmidt


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thatquietgir1 wrote:I like this! The thumbnail doesn't properly represent the design though, it looks like the head has no body. The only other suggestion I have for next time is to spend a couple minutes smoothing out some of the lines in the body so they flow better. Other than that I really like the textures and placement of the design, looks good!


Thanks that is helpful. I noticed that the thumbnail did not look as great, but was not sure if that would prevent people from looking at it or not. I guess it does, I will try to do that better next derby, bit late for this one.

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