Derby #263: England

The Only Map You Need

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valasia


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Re: The Only Map You Need


I think this would be better with the "...And straight on till morning" text on the shirt. As it is now it just looks like a generic space shirt.

darling375


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valasia wrote:I think this would be better with the "...And straight on till morning" text on the shirt. As it is now it just looks like a generic space shirt.


Thanks! I know it still needs something - This is only my third submission, so I appreciate any feedback!

kseybert


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Re: The Only Map You Need


I really like this design. I don't think it needs any script. Barrie fans will get it.

darling375


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kseybert wrote:I really like this design. I don't think it needs any script. Barrie fans will get it.


Thank you!

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