Derby #265: Imaginary Restaurants
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Take Out is Free

Take Out is Free
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aarrun


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I like the original better. Though the tagline is more legible here, the shape of the arrow is less pleasing. And I abhor faux-aging effects. It's so Abercrombie & Fitch, I feel embarrassed even shopping on a site that prints such shirts.

Good luck with the original though. It's a fine idea, well-executed.
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harantula


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the idea is brilliant!






runnerfrog13


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I'm glad to see you reworked the arrow to fit the tagline on it, and made it blue - it looks much more legible and better graphically! I do, however, miss the original tagline you used, "feed your brain for free." Seemed to fit with the library theme better. As for the distressed look, normally I'm not a fan, but you did a good job making it subtle, and it really helps the vintage look of the design.

photogrartist


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runnerfrog13 wrote: I do, however, miss the original tagline you used, "feed your brain for free." Seemed to fit with the library theme better.


I agree. Maybe it hard to fit it with a big enough font size. Would "Free Brain Food" be an alternative?

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