Derby #265: Imaginary Restaurants
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Hannibal's Bistro

Hannibal's Bistro
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Brandiegirl


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I hear fava beans and a fine chianti go well with liver. Well done!

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Mavyn


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I think this would do better if there were a few more elements. I'm normally a fan of keeping thing simple, but the meat and beans don't have any context. A plate, napkin...just something to ground them instead of having the float within the text.
Having the base of the wine glass 'flat' messes with the plane perspective for the meat and beans.

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slimjim0


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Mavyn wrote:I think this would do better if there were a few more elements. I'm normally a fan of keeping thing simple, but the meat and beans don't have any context. A plate, napkin...just something to ground them instead of having the float within the text.
Having the base of the wine glass 'flat' messes with the plane perspective for the meat and beans.


Thanks for the advice, well received. I agree, I am new to the shirt derbies and CS6 so I struggle to get shirts posted in time. I wanted to add more, such as a plate and a place mat, but simply ran out of time.

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