Derby #268: Crosshatch Rehash

Imagination

Not a shirt color we offer

Rejected because: Not a shirt color we offer

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chellemonkey


quality posts: 5 Private Messages chellemonkey
Re: Imagination


This design is cute but the color makes it not as desirable and the thumbnail nearly made me not click it at all.

blk909


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Re: Imagination


What color is the shirt?

runnerfrog13


quality posts: 10 Private Messages runnerfrog13
chellemonkey wrote:This design is cute but the color makes it not as desirable and the thumbnail nearly made me not click it at all.

I agree. It's a cute design and deserves a better chance.

The orange would look great on a blue shirt, like a navy or royal, but on this tan shirt it's just hard to look at the design. That's what I would fix to start.

Second, pick a different thumbnail, zoomed out more than your current thumbnail. One of the kid's face + pipe or face+scarf would be good, or one with the box in it. That will give your voters a better feel for the design and make them interested in seeing more of it. Right now the closeup of the cloud isn't very attractive and doesn't show off your design.

Good luck!

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