Derby #289: Literary Classics
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To Grandmother's House We Go (Red Riding Hood)

To Grandmother's House We Go (Red Riding Hood)
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zwartepaard


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+1'd just for the beautiful and tasteful use of typography. :D Good luck!

orabbit


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zwartepaard wrote:+1'd just for the beautiful and tasteful use of typography. :D Good luck!


Thanks! I try.

j5


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Re: To Grandmother's House We Go (Red Riding Hood)

Hungry like that wolf!

Nice touch with your signature rabbit almost part of the design

move along

Nekkochan


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Does this get bonus points for being a mashup of two unrelated pre-1920 classics?

neuropsychosocial


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zwartepaard wrote:... beautiful and tasteful use of typography...

I couldn't say it better!

RIP A.A. Blanks (Obituary)

orabbit


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Nekkochan wrote:Does this get bonus points for being a mashup of two unrelated pre-1920 classics?


Yes it does. Each vote counts twice!

And thanks, neuro!

rasabi


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Just chiming in with the admiration of your typography. Also it looks quite nice on the shirt. Nice job !

deborah11565


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From a true admirer of your work.... the text design and scrollwork are phenomenal ! The wolf appears a bit tired, comparatively speaking.

orabbit


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rasabi wrote:Just chiming in with the admiration of your typography. Also it looks quite nice on the shirt. Nice job !


Thanks, rasabi! And deborah, you'd be tired too if you had to work this hard for every meal.

deborah11565


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orabbit wrote:Thanks, rasabi! And deborah, you'd be tired too if you had to work this hard for every meal.


I agree !

flattopfrank


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Looks like it could be the cover art for a book. Good Job ! gmv

edgrrrzzmom


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j5 wrote:Hungry like that wolf!

Nice touch with your signature rabbit almost part of the design

If you look at the thumbnail, I don't think the rabbit is part of the design, just the signature.

orabbit


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edgrrrzzmom wrote:If you look at the thumbnail, I don't think the rabbit is part of the design, just the signature.


He was just commenting that I made my signature rabbit part of the scene by adding the exclamation point. Thanks for noticing j5!

lotsofgoats


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Re: To Grandmother's House We Go (Red Riding Hood)

Constructive criticism time! I think the ribs make your wolf look kinda gaunt, where you'd expect to be seeing more strength. I could see you going for him being hungry, but I don't think that's what's conveyed.

I can see a similar argument for the tongue, what with the whole "running through the woods for a meal" deal. I think it's left looking too floppy, though, more like a care-free dog than a wolf licking his chops.

I like your style, though, and will echo regarding the font. Sorry about having such late comments :P

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