Derby #294: You Be The Algorithm
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FOOD - TREE - ODDBALL - HISTORY (resub)

FOOD - TREE - ODDBALL - HISTORY (resub)
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Randyotter


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Previous Version said F*CK GRAVITY

stickililli


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Somehow the new slogan doesn't have the same effect.. I liked the idea "Forget Gravity!"
Or maybe
"Gravity? Ha!"
"Gravity? I don't think so!"
"Eat my dust Gravity!"

i.e. something that defies gravity rather than denying its existence.

Ok - that's my two cents! Great design in any case!!

-StickiLilli

albertoarni


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I liked it more with the F#CK word, the idea is very funny, good luck Randy!


facemeetpavement


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i like "gravity is a lie" a lot better than the original actually. he's soaring off making a dramatic declaration and blowing that guy's mind, its weird and hilarious. the original just makes me think, "why would the apple be an angry teenager?"

Johndis5


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I actually think this is much funnier this way, and not for prudish reasons either.

CityVelo


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I enjoy this one a lot, but I really wish it was just the apple portion on the shirt. I know, it loses the visual context and blah, blah, blah, but I feel like it is much stronger and much more hilarious with only the apple soaring upward to defy gravity.

I, personally, prefer the subtlety of just an apple.

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cherylfrancis


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I sure like the original waaaaay better. This one's alright. Still damned funny. Goooood stuff!


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