Derby #319: Song Titles Reinterpreted
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Running With the Devil

Running With the Devil
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lerandia


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Re: Running With the Devil


This had potential.

marceepauff


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lerandia wrote:This had potential.


What could've made it better?

sonofafish


quality posts: 11 Private Messages sonofafish
marceepauff wrote:What could've made it better?


Well, perhaps my advice is extraneous, but I have thought of some ways to "plus" this design. Instead of a splosh of white in the back, maybe a silhoutte depicting more exercise machines, or dudes on freeweights, or anything to reinforce the gym location. You could have also put the devil into workout clothes, maybe asweatband and some ipod earbuds, that would have been funny. Mainly, though, I'm not sure about the story i'm seeing in their faces. The guy looks scared and the devil looks resolute. Is he actually running with the devil or was he minding his own when the devil chose the treadmill next to his? It's a cool idea overall though.

marceepauff


quality posts: 18 Private Messages marceepauff
sonofafish wrote:Well, perhaps my advice is extraneous, but I have thought of some ways to "plus" this design. Instead of a splosh of white in the back, maybe a silhoutte depicting more exercise machines, or dudes on freeweights, or anything to reinforce the gym location. You could have also put the devil into workout clothes, maybe asweatband and some ipod earbuds, that would have been funny. Mainly, though, I'm not sure about the story i'm seeing in their faces. The guy looks scared and the devil looks resolute. Is he actually running with the devil or was he minding his own when the devil chose the treadmill next to his? It's a cool idea overall though.


Thanks for the feedback, fishy.

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