Derby #320: Fall

Welcome To Autum

Not on a hoodie, off-topic, not a color we offer, etc.

Rejected because: Not on a hoodie, off-topic, not a color we offer, etc.

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bwhitcomb82


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Um, what the...

gregosz


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Re: Welcome To Autum


Sometimes my designs are odd, this one is of a sick flower vomiting on a bug due to the colder weather.

gregosz


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bwhitcomb82 wrote:Um, what the...


Sorry, I'm new to the site. This design is a little odd. It's of a sick flower vomiting on a bug due to weather change. It's unfinish, needed to be inked but I figured why not throw that in.

bwhitcomb82


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It's not just the oddity of it. The design on the mock up is blurry and you don't have it on a hoodie mock up either

theco2


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Re: Welcome To Autum

I like odd stuff, but this is just "No!" in the derby or not! On that note, I would like to see some of your other stuff, if you have done anything else.


Mavyn


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Needs to be on one of the woot color choices, thumbnail should match the comp, needs a hoodie...Sorry, but why throw something in when it's just going to be rejected?

My speech is not parsing. I am speaking in ellipsis.

gregosz


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Mavyn wrote:Needs to be on one of the woot color choices, thumbnail should match the comp, needs a hoodie...Sorry, but why throw something in when it's just going to be rejected?


You right, all my designs were rejected so I think I will take a break from submitting stuff

Mavyn


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gregosz wrote:You right, all my designs were rejected so I think I will take a break from submitting stuff


Or...read the rules? Just a thought. I'm not discouraging participation, I just don't understand not reading the rules and making an effort to comply so that you can actually compete.

My speech is not parsing. I am speaking in ellipsis.

sonofafish


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Mavyn wrote:Or...read the rules? Just a thought. I'm not discouraging participation, I just don't understand not reading the rules and making an effort to comply so that you can actually compete.


Couldn't agree more. Also, ask us! Designers here are pretty nice folk, I got a lot of helpful hints from a pretty experienced designer when I began 6 or 7 derbies ago. Don't be discouraged, just jump back on and show us what you got!

gregosz


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sonofafish wrote:Couldn't agree more. Also, ask us! Designers here are pretty nice folk, I got a lot of helpful hints from a pretty experienced designer when I began 6 or 7 derbies ago. Don't be discouraged, just jump back on and show us what you got!



Thank you, I will do better next time, it's a learning process at this point. Thank you again for the input

benjaminleebates


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gregosz wrote:Thank you, I will do better next time, it's a learning process at this point. Thank you again for the input


My first several attempts were rejected, just a FYI.

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