Derby #323: Epic Fantasy
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The Crow and the Wolf in the Snow

The Crow and the Wolf in the Snow
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sonofafish


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Re: The Crow and the Wolf in the Snow


Thought I might try a tessellation this time. Because you know... they're neat. Hope you like it!

rwoodruff


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oakenspirit


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sonofafish


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rwoodruff wrote:Neat!


Toldja! ;) Seriously though, thank you!

oakenspirit wrote:This, I like!


Thanks man! This I appreciate!

rwoodruff


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sonofafish wrote:Thanks man! This I appreciate!


Lol I hadn't even read your description yet. But really though, it's great. It's amazing to see how much you've improved since you first started submitting

sonofafish


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rwoodruff wrote:Lol I hadn't even read your description yet. But really though, it's great. It's amazing to see how much you've improved since you first started submitting


Thanks! I've been trying! :D

SSilverstein


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It's quite beautiful. Tessellations do not seem easy to do. Also, not all the entries capture the actual theme of "FOG of war" - here you capture the internal, individual fog of war -- what is the point of this war, what is my moral responsibility, am I fighting for my side/tribe or for humanity, how do I see beyond the fog. Like it!

sonofafish


quality posts: 9 Private Messages sonofafish
SSilverstein wrote:It's quite beautiful. Tessellations do not seem easy to do. Also, not all the entries capture the actual theme of "FOG of war" - here you capture the internal, individual fog of war -- what is the point of this war, what is my moral responsibility, am I fighting for my side/tribe or for humanity, how do I see beyond the fog. Like it!


He's certainly the protagonist with the most conflict about who exactly he should be fighting for, and I don't think it's a mistake that he was associated by GRRM most closely with the traditional Norse/Old English beasts of battle (2 out of 3 anyway). But yes, by all that I mean thank you!

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