Derby #345: Snarky Slogans
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Just died of dysentry? Nope, disinterest!!

Just died of dysentry? Nope, disinterest!!
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amanoxford


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Re: Just died of dysentry? Nope, disinterest!!


Know someone whose utter self involvement and constant droning on makes you wish you'd just died of dysentry? Well, now subtly tell everyone around them you've just died of disinterest - it's not as if they'll notice, it's not about them!! :D

amanoxford


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thumperchick wrote:Best use of derby theme I've seen so far. +1


Cheers ☺ now if only I knew how to get anyone else to vote for me, lol!

thumperchick


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amanoxford wrote:Cheers ☺ now if only I knew how to get anyone else to vote for me, lol!


If you are open to an honest criticism...

Your idea was a crack up, spot on for snark.

The artwork is not up to current derby standards. The style of Oregan Trail was specific, and this doesn't hit it. It looks like clip art, and that's hurting your chance of getting votes.

Getting better at the artwork will help.

amanoxford


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thumperchick wrote:If you are open to an honest criticism...

Your idea was a crack up, spot on for snark.

The artwork is not up to current derby standards. The style of Oregan Trail. as specific, and this doesn't hit it. It looks like clip art, and that's hurting your chance of getting votes.

Getting better at the artwork will help.


Yeah, totally fair point, never done any 8-bit work before and the rush to get it done for the next day didn't help, I'm going to work this up for my RedBubble as an 8-bit exercise for me ☺

shikausstan


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Re: Just died of dysentry? Nope, disinterest!!


A few other pointers might be:
Make the Clydesdale Horse either bigger or make it an ox like in the game.
Take out the Dead Body outline.

amanoxford


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shikausstan wrote:A few other pointers might be:
Make the Clydesdale Horse either bigger or make it an ox like in the game.
Take out the Dead Body outline.


Yeah I reckon I'll go back to the Ox, didn't want it to look "stolen" by using Ox and wagon, but authenticity seems to be the order of the day - well, that and some decent drawing, lol!

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