Derby #360: Americana
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Proud to be an American...

Proud to be an American...
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darickjt


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Snakes & sparklers is all I like

thebiscuit


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I think this would have looked better on a black shirt (so the brightly colored fireworks really pop) with the silhouette in rich gray/charcoal instead of the other way around. I'd also have thrown in the Gateway Arch in your USA locale symbols for symmetry and balance.

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jquinn0516


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thebiscuit wrote:I think this would have looked better on a black shirt (so the brightly colored fireworks really pop) with the silhouette in rich gray/charcoal instead of the other way around. I'd also have thrown in the Gateway Arch in your USA locale symbols for symmetry and balance.


Thank you for the feedback!!! I've been practicing for awhile and looking for suggestions/feedback. And great ideas!



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