odysseyroc


quality posts: 30 Private Messages odysseyroc
sekiyoku wrote:Thankyou, the lighting is intended to be coming from the top right. I'm not sure exactly what conflicting parts you're referring to, but the lighter outline I have against the shadows of the dragon is intended to be environmental lighting.



The main thing is the face, if the light is coming from behind, the face of the dragon should be in shadow. Also the ice cream tub's core shadow should be on the opposite side. There's also a few things here and there that could help sell your light source. I'm not sure what that shadow above the arm is supposed ot be.

I did a very quick overpaint just to show you what I'm talking about.





jasneko


quality posts: 29 Private Messages jasneko
Re: Lantern Lights

A collaboration between myself and Bassanimation. I did the linework and she did an absolutely fantastic job coloring

Votes and feedback appreciated - thanks!

Vote!

loveengrey


quality posts: 5 Private Messages loveengrey

haha couldn't figure out a "better title"?

I like this design though. The dragon taking up 3 panels is pretty fun. Its a real nostalgic design for me though. My old viewfinder had never even crossed my mind for at least 15 years until I saw this, so yay.

dietotaku


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Re: Tony Was Tanked because Babe is a TOTAL Cow!



the thumbnail made me lol. XD

xemnas01


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http://lol.ianloic.com/image-cache/67c/67c795c374ed09eb05adadecb00b.jpg

ThatsClownShoes


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Re: Tom Servo Rock



my name says it all

endangeredomega


quality posts: 37 Private Messages endangeredomega
Re: Nacho Goat!




[shrugs] makes at least as much sense as a dragon with a pile of ice-cream, i suppose.

loveengrey


quality posts: 5 Private Messages loveengrey

Oh wow this looks so much better with the orange lines in the back rather than the really blocky grey. Really nice job coming up with a unique design

dietotaku


quality posts: 0 Private Messages dietotaku
Re: Paper Cuts



LOVE this on black. <3

sekiyoku


quality posts: 18 Private Messages sekiyoku

Er, scaffolding, I meant to say top left. I like how your overpaint looks though. I think the main issue you have if it's top left then is the shadow under the neck? But I put it there since the dragon's head is blocking it.

odysseyroc wrote:The main thing is the face, if the light is coming from behind, the face of the dragon should be in shadow. Also the ice cream tub's core shadow should be on the opposite side. There's also a few things here and there that could help sell your light source. I'm not sure what that shadow above the arm is supposed ot be.

I did a very quick overpaint just to show you what I'm talking about.



loveengrey


quality posts: 5 Private Messages loveengrey

I still like it, but why'd you take the rabbit out of the design?

wootvan


quality posts: 59 Private Messages wootvan
Re: Piggly’s Discovery



This should get more votes when the deals.woot crowd finds it.

Zuuku


quality posts: 1 Private Messages Zuuku
Re: Tom Servo Rock



used to be a shirt like this on threadless.

odysseyroc


quality posts: 30 Private Messages odysseyroc
sekiyoku wrote:Er, scaffolding, I meant to say top left. I like how your overpaint looks though. I think the main issue you have if it's top left then is the shadow under the neck? But I put it there since the dragon's head is blocking it.



If it's top left, then the dragons back should be in shadow and the chest in the light. There's still a few other things that would need to be tweaked, but that's the big issue to me.





loveengrey


quality posts: 5 Private Messages loveengrey

Wow. So glad you cleaned this one up and it looks so much better now. All the animals are clear now and it all just flows together a lot better now.

jerroul


quality posts: 0 Private Messages jerroul
Re: ...And they have a plan.



This needs and deserves more votes! great concept...awesome execution...GMV...

ThatsClownShoes


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Re: Muddy Paws



There is much better work in this derby than this. Not that its not creative, but this does not deserve to be in the fog.

sekiyoku


quality posts: 18 Private Messages sekiyoku
odysseyroc wrote:If it's top left, then the dragons back should be in shadow and the chest in the light. There's still a few other things that would need to be teaked, but that's the big issue to me.



I think the issue is that I shaded it moreso as light coming from the top than the left. That's why I put the belly area in shadow and the back in light because it's the bottom and the top respectively...

edit - looking back on it though, I would add more shadow on the lower area of the back near the curve..

enikcilik


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jerroul wrote:This needs and deserves more votes! great concept...awesome execution...GMV...



I totally agree!! Get everyone you know on woot to vote!

blosmtx


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dietotaku wrote:LOVE this on black. <3



I'm not a fan of this on black. The dropped scissors get lost on such a dark color.

Still, GMV because I like the design.

loveengrey


quality posts: 5 Private Messages loveengrey

Aww this ones so cute! I also like how this is one of the only shirts in the derby where the initial reaction is "oh thats for chinese new years". Great colors also. They really stand out.

cmdixon2


quality posts: 20 Private Messages cmdixon2
Re: Lantern Lights



This is wonderful Jasneko! I really like this one. Great work!

ThatsClownShoes


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Re: Nacho Goat!



*bangs head against the wall, and throws hands up*

darel


quality posts: 1 Private Messages darel
loveengrey wrote:Wow. So glad you cleaned this one up and it looks so much better now. All the animals are clear now and it all just flows together a lot better now.



Yeap, spent quite a bit of time reworking the little details, just hope it pays off. And thanks, glad you liked it!

Zarfus


quality posts: 2 Private Messages Zarfus
Re: Muddy Paws



This is great!

loveengrey


quality posts: 5 Private Messages loveengrey
sekiyoku wrote:Super cute! My favorite is the tiger, I like how he's peeking his little head out..

cute food tastes better



haha I always feel bad when I eat cute food though, like those little animal crackers or hello panda cookies. i always imagine the food screaming or something like that. I'd rather eat cute than ugly though

omnitarian


quality posts: 15 Private Messages omnitarian
Re: The Ancient Chinese Raggon



This is awesome on so many levels.

jabberjaws13


quality posts: 2 Private Messages jabberjaws13
Re: Tiger Conquers Time



no text. roman numerals are text. try again and resub.

Happy Beer.

Zarfus


quality posts: 2 Private Messages Zarfus
Re: Year of the Tiger



I personally like it much better without the rabbit. Nice work!

lostgambit


quality posts: 0 Private Messages lostgambit

This is my second submission ever, feedback appreciated.

I don't really understand the use of trademarked characters but they seem to get printed a lot. To the mods, if this is rejected can you explain what makes this different or what I could do to save it?

Thanks everyone!

Zarfus


quality posts: 2 Private Messages Zarfus
Re: It's an order, RACE!



Nice detail! <3

jabberjaws13


quality posts: 2 Private Messages jabberjaws13
Re: Lantern Lights



great job jas! and great job shawna! i was wondering where you were in the thread. gmv fo sho! good luck!

Happy Beer.

shaftalicous


quality posts: 0 Private Messages shaftalicous
Re: Muddy Paws



Seriously? This is great? I would rather wear a shirt that says "PANTS" on it.

loveengrey


quality posts: 5 Private Messages loveengrey

Your tiger is awesome. Very well done.

shaftalicous


quality posts: 0 Private Messages shaftalicous
Re: Nacho Goat!




*bangs head against the wall, and throws hands up, also*

flower753


quality posts: 2 Private Messages flower753
Re: Zodiac Master



I have a small collection of Viewmasters and Viewmaster slides. I want this! GMV

jasneko


quality posts: 29 Private Messages jasneko

Lovely! I like the idea and you did a great job.

Vote!

Sachmoe64


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loveengrey wrote:I still like it, but why'd you take the rabbit out of the design?



The rabbit was a joke... Im sick of the constant rabbits.

eye4spot


quality posts: 0 Private Messages eye4spot
Re: Lantern Lights



GMV This is nicely grouped...the viewer's eye serpentines through the images. I also like that it is clearly a Chinese New Year design.



Mandarin Hat , Tiger, Wings

loveengrey


quality posts: 5 Private Messages loveengrey

Yeah I like it better without the rabbit also. I just wanna know why it got taken out haha =p