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I stayed up till 3am for this? Um. Awesome?



Please give me your thoughts. Shall I bother to colour neatly? Is it clear he's yawning? Do monsters wear pants? Will I ever stop sucking so badly? I need to go to bed. It's nighttime in Australia.

mihalis aya wrote:I stayed up till 3am for this? Um. Awesome?
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Please give me your thoughts. Shall I bother to colour neatly? Is it clear he's yawning? Do monsters wear pants? Will I ever stop sucking so badly? I need to go to bed. It's nighttime in Australia.

The rough coloring is good. No need for pants... I think the shirt is weird though.

mihalis aya wrote:I stayed up till 3am for this? Um. Awesome?



Please give me your thoughts. Shall I bother to colour neatly? Is it clear he's yawning? Do monsters wear pants? Will I ever stop sucking so badly? I need to go to bed. It's nighttime in Australia.

I think the stripes on the shirt probably need to have that same sketchy feel as the rest of the piece. That'll probably make the shirt look a little more like it belongs.

no stipulations woo woo! well I'm going to aim for a shirt you can wear year-round.

So, woot overlords, any chance of free speedy shipping for this week of Halloween goodness? I just know smart post would get me my Halloween shirts just in time for Thanksgiving.

liberalandproud wrote:So, woot overlords, any chance of free speedy shipping for this week of Halloween goodness? I just know smart post would get me my Halloween shirts just in time for Thanksgiving.

How about forced +$5 shipping, all shirts are 15$ this week woo woo!!!

mihalis aya wrote:
Please give me your thoughts. Shall I bother to colour neatly? Is it clear he's yawning? Do monsters wear pants? Will I ever stop sucking so badly? I need to go to bed. It's nighttime in Australia.

i like the concept & the execution. what a great opportunity to do a t-shirt within a t-shirt.

i'm thinking you're not sold on the yawning. try opening the mouth more, tilting the head back and making the eyes squinty instead of shut.

sal

mihalis aya wrote:I stayed up till 3am for this? Um. Awesome?

Please give me your thoughts. Shall I bother to colour neatly? Is it clear he's yawning? Do monsters wear pants? Will I ever stop sucking so badly? I need to go to bed. It's nighttime in Australia.

You should have a small childs hand coming out of it's mouth/bag

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I've made a new Puffaluff shirt specifically for Halloween. I've decided to try and sell it via my puffaluff web site instead of annoying everyone here with more puffaluff entries.

Click the image above or click here to order the shirt. Thanks!

discodancing wrote:I've made a new Puffaluff shirt specifically for Halloween

wootaluffoween?

discodancing wrote:My final shameless plug in a more relevant forum.....



I've made a new Puffaluff shirt specifically for Halloween. I've decided to try and sell it via my puffaluff web site instead of annoying everyone here with more puffaluff entries.

Click the image above or click here to order the shirt. Thanks!

You might also do one with just a lone ranger type mask... or maybe add a voice bubble (like the ones on the blog) saying "trick or cheese".

I got my shirts ready.

mihalis aya wrote:I stayed up till 3am for this? Um. Awesome?



Please give me your thoughts. Shall I bother to colour neatly? Is it clear he's yawning? Do monsters wear pants? Will I ever stop sucking so badly? I need to go to bed. It's nighttime in Australia.

WOW, i thought he was crying because he was trick or treating and everyone was making fun of his costume.

I have a conservative 5 ideas for this derby - there's a few more that I don't know if I'll be able to complete in time, but we'll see... It should be a fun one.

Hey jack, wheres that link to your newest shirt template again?

I'm going to be really nice this time.

The winning shirts will be sold as part of a full week of Halloween shirt festivity, and we've already chosen the commissioned shirts we're going to sell during that week. So if it looks like we ripped off your zombies-trick-or-treating-in-Atlantis shirt idea, well, we didn't.

Please tell me they used their 60 day policy to "commission" some of Pen's old designs!

damiendone wrote:I'm going to be really nice this time.

I'm looking forward to it. I was actually surprised and pleased at your civility toward Jack near the end last time on the gradient issue. My one request is that you please shrink your sig pix. Thanks.

liberalandproud wrote:So, woot overlords, any chance of free speedy shipping for this week of Halloween goodness? I just know smart post would get me my Halloween shirts just in time for Thanksgiving.

I'm still just hoping to receive my Zombie Season shirts in time for Halloween...no sign of those shipping yet though, so it probably won't happen.

discodancing wrote:

I've made a new Puffaluff shirt specifically for Halloween.

Click the image above or click here to order the shirt. Thanks!

Love it. Long live the Puffs.

mihalis aya wrote:I stayed up till 3am for this? Um. Awesome?



Please give me your thoughts. Shall I bother to colour neatly? Is it clear he's yawning? Do monsters wear pants? Will I ever stop sucking so badly? I need to go to bed. It's nighttime in Australia.

Neat! Nice take on my idea, I like the coloring job, but I agree the shirt is a little odd. And the mask isn't really obvious that it' s a kid mask. Maybe a full face mask? And do monsters need pants? I like the purple fur. I don't think this sucks badly at all.

mihalis aya wrote:
Please give me your thoughts. Shall I bother to colour neatly? Is it clear he's yawning? Do monsters wear pants? Will I ever stop sucking so badly? I need to go to bed. It's nighttime in Australia.

Agree with AttilatheMom on the mask issue - full face (maybe even flesh colored or with a fringe of blonde hair - if you could fit it into the 6 color limit) would get the point across a bit better IMO. The balled fist does make it look a bit more like crying than yawning, maybe opening the hand could fix that. I also think the monster could use a nose or snout. He's cute as it is, but I think that it looks a bit funny with that missing (of course, he is a monster so it's not technically necessary).

Overall I like the color choices and the roughness, the monster's shirt and pantslessness look fine to me, and I think you did the idea justice.

TAYLORT5 wrote:WOW, i thought he was crying because he was trick or treating and everyone was making fun of his costume.

I thought so too. Maybe having his hand open and covering his mouth instead of rubbing his eye would get that across better.

derekfilley wrote:Hey jack, wheres that link to your newest shirt template again?

oh, right.

BRAND NEW REAL-TEE TEMPLATE, VERSION 5!

...ahem, that is all.

Finished my design last night. I think i'm going to do better this week.
Hopefully...

Hey all,

At long last, my online portfolio!!!.

Check it out to see my past derby entries (and perhaps a preview of my current derby entries ;-)

*Big props to IMCOMPA for helping me get it together!!*

derekfilley wrote:Hey all,

At long last, my online portfolio!!!.

Check it out to see my past derby entries (and perhaps a preview of my current derby entries ;-)

*Big props to IMCOMPA for helping me get it together!!*

Yes yes I know I rock. Let's see how well I can do as an anonymous entrant this derby...

cwarrington wrote:Uh hmmm... no props for showing ya that Lightbox script?! ;P j/k

Looks good...

*Big props for CW who helped me with the cool photo preview effects! (extra props for being from AZ)*

derekfilley wrote:Hey all,

At long last, my online portfolio!!!.

Check it out to see my past derby entries (and perhaps a preview of my current derby entries ;-)

*Big props to IMCOMPA for helping me get it together!!*

*love* the Halloween preview! This is going to be a blast.

any thoughts on this design?

thanks!

itsoinky wrote:any thoughts on this design?

thanks!

hah that's neat, creepy but neat
might want to move that candy below him, looks like he's touching and that's a huge pile of doody or something...

Any suggestions on my scarecrow?

Josephus wrote:Any suggestions on my scarecrow?

cranberry Dr. J. cranberry

zewkin wrote:*love* the Halloween preview! This is going to be a blast.

Thanks, I'm definately going to try to get away from abstract for a while and stick to making shirts that make me laugh ;-)

Josephus wrote:Any suggestions on my scarecrow?

I like the idea, but (however juvenile) I can't get over the impression that he has a pole up his a**. Plus, physically speaking, that would be an impressive feat to balance it like that without leaning the rake against something.

Like the detail on the scarecrow body and face itself though. And contrary to others, I think the shirt color choice is fine.

princessproton wrote:Love it. Long live the Puffs.

or the english version: long live the poufs.

imcompa wrote:hah that's neat, creepy but neat
might want to move that candy below him, looks like he's touching and that's a huge pile of doody or something...

Yeah, I'd have to agree. For me it's not the huge pile in the back, but rather the small pieces (crumbs?) in front of him that look a little off.

itsoinky wrote:any thoughts on this design?

thanks!

it looks like the kid is pooing because right under him is a bunch of little poos.