davengvar
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Re: Music Box

I like the 2x2 format in the thumbnail better than the 1x4 layout. I feel like it'd be stretched out too much. But I love the clean, simple design and the humor.
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The world is a business, Mr. Beale. It has been since man crawled out of the slime.
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Haha. I don't like the way this was drawn - it's too blurry and the details you've chosen to shown make no sense - but I like the concept and wit.
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Re: The Musical Matrix

Ugly and way too crowded.
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Re: Music From the Heart Doesn't Alway Make Sense

I like this design but I'm not thrilled about the shirt color.
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Re: The Universal Language

This is cute. I love how the musical instruments - it almost seems like they have personalities (the cello even almost seems to smile).
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Re: Listening (with Lashes)
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The placement of the design is really odd. I don't like it. This design also seems more appropriate for a painting than a shirt - I like it, but I don't think I'd wear it.
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Re: Music Is in the Air

1. I think the halftones are fine.
2. I would've gone for a brighter blue, one that was more sky-like, since your shirt is, after all, depicting the sky.
3. The red of the hydrogens stands out too much among the blue/yellow/green atoms. The red is too bright.
4. I almost want to say that all of the molecules should have been smaller. The size of the molecules makes the design more juvenile, I think. I wouldn't have added MORE molecules to the design though.
The world is a business, Mr. Beale. It has been since man crawled out of the slime.