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mrwednesday wrote:The sad thing is that this seems to be a remarkably common trend. It wasn't until very recently that I saw anyone post here that had never purchased a shirt. Anymore they are quite quite common and most talk about the types of shirts they've bought in the past....The numbers of accounts with very low purchase totals is also worrisome. They all love ramy and buy all his designs but a sitting on less than 3 woots in many cases.
I realize that I've been here for over a year and a half and have yet to pass the 25 mark (I'm very close) but the wealth of new accounts talking about things which went on before they joined is getting very high and very troublesome.
Have you noticed that most of the comments in their threads come from people that have joined in the past 8 months? I hope that it's just a fanbase they brought with them, but with their track record, it just makes it even more suspicious.
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Re: The Aviator

Is pretty good but where's the steampunk, if the googles were slightly more elaborate or the wings more mechanical this would be ideal.
Signatures? I don't believe in them...
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Re: Steampunk Angel

The art is beautiful but I do agree that the textured gray color kills it. Think about it - was there even heather gray around in the time whose elements you're trying to emulate?
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cobolisdead
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Re: Steamworks Operatica V.2

I liked it better on Asphalt shirt. Still GMV, and I hope that you bump out one of the designs in the fog, because you seriously deserved to be printed over any of them in it now. If for no other reason then you are on topic and they are not. Good luck sir.
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Re: Soul Mechanism (resub)
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I can't imagine this shirt with an off-center placement. It looks great as is. The pink really pops - good for you for being bold enough to use it. This shirt is tough but pretty and I really like it.
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Re: Steampunk Dragon

I think the colors are fine. It's a dragon. It's supposed to stand out. I think it could use more meat on its bones though - it looks skinny to the point that you could snap it in half, but dragons are supposed to be very intimidating creatures.
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IamIreland wrote:Fairly clever, but all-too reminscent of this fellow: http://www.topatoco.com/merchant.mvc?Screen=PROD&Store_Code=TO&Product_Code=WON-PORTHOLE&Category_Code=WON
That's the second time I've seen you post that link and I don't think it was really applicable either time - the shirt in that link is ugly, and both steampunk heart designs I've seen here have been well-drawn and had neat details.
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davengvar wrote:I've never been a fan of chaos designs like this one and I really think it fits the theme. Just because the style has Victorian elements and there are machines involved doesn't mean it's steampunk.
you know, I could see where you'd be coming from if it were just the people with their Steam punk weapons and armor. I could see where you coming from it were just the gears and steam(Steam that is actually white for a change). However, both of them, along with the Steam powered Robotic Dog and the Steam powered Robot that they just caught and have chained up really tie it together as Steam Punk, IMO.
I think it's tragic that this isn't in 1st place right now, as it clearly is the best design for this theme. It just goes to show the sorry state that these derbies have become in the past 7 months.
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Re: Style Cogs

I really love the colors. I don't know if this is necessarily steampunk though.
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Re: BUG U (ladybug flight academy)
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The head of the ladybug has good detailing - why doesn't the body? That area of the shirt feels empty.
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Re: Cloudmaker

My favorite part of this design is the space where the steam overlaps with the body. The designing, especially in those spots, is well done.
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Re: [url=http://shirt.woot.com/Derby/Entry.aspx?id=30980]
This is beautiful and winsome. I'd buy it as a painting, not sure about a shirt though.
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Astolpho wrote:Thanks. About five minutes after I made that post I cringed and wished there was an edit button so I could back and scrub the whining out. There's no crying in baseball!
Edit: Oh, there's the edit button. It's a wonder I'm even able to dress myself in the morning. :/
Heh :-) You have to have a good sense of humor on woot! Just keep designing and throwing things up - you never know what will catch on here.
I think you had a good design idea because I can see it in some of the elements - the fire in the ribcage, the steam coming out of the eyes, the overall menacing feel of the shirt. I think that there is room for improvement with how you draw your ideas, like drawing the body more clearly and making the contraption the dragon is holding more identifiable.
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adamsw216 wrote:I really like the idea, but I think it needs a bit more compositional attention to give it that extra push...
Definitely agree. More attention to details could have made this shirt a real standout.
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Re: Steampunk Designer

Especially like the bird and the feel. Don't like the way the hands or legs were drawn.
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Re: When Pigs Fly

Ahahahaha this is cute.
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koronae wrote:This is actually very cool. Would've loved seeing clockwork animals or robots working on it. But the premise is great.
Ohhh, clockwork animals/robots would've been wonderful. I totally would have voted for this shirt if that had been the case.
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Re: Steamborg (resub)
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I like your sense of humor and your style. I don't like this particular design but I hope you submit more in the future.
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hasdgfas wrote:Hey, look a butterfly. With gears inside it and a wisp of steam.
Sorry ramy, but steampunk is not the same thing as steam and gears.
I agree with this statement. The design is visually appealing (except for the dripping part at the bottom) but it is not steampunk.
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Re: Steamway

See, this is steampunk. Good job sticking to the theme. I would've preferred darker lines though - the "steamway" blends too much into the fog for my liking.
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branmak wrote:Of course it's been done. My theme: a broken heart has been done before - because we're human and that happens. I thought I had a good idea there: my heart being put back into place, fixed, and locked up this time. I figured that was something that other people could identify with. Because they've had broken hearts before too.
It wasn't meant to be some great piece of artwork - since I don't have enough free time for that but it was supposed to represent that feeling.
No, I did not ever see any other piece of artwork like this except for Ironman and that humonculous in Hellboy. But those were just portholes on the chest. If the idea is similar to what others have done, that's to be expected I think - stick a porthole on the chest and what's inside? A heart! Amazing! And with as many people that are out there, I guess someone else would come up with the idea too.
I just wanted to jump into the derby and have some fun. The designing was fun - getting these flames were not. But thanks for the feedback anyways. And thanks to everyone who voted for my locked-up heart!
I wouldn't worry too much about it. I don't think most woot people will believe you intentionally tried to copy someone else's design. Just ignore the bashers and try again next week.
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Re: Steampunk Willie

You are a very versatile artist, tgentry.
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