Starion


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Re: Diet Coke Mentos = Rocket



I like it! It's very clean.

However I think those pesky copyright issues are going to get in the way. Maybe change Coke to Cola and Mentos to...Mentoes? Menthos? Mint-O's? Something that isn't branded already. >_>

s7even


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Re: Red Flew



I buy it if it wasn't centered. I prefer art to be in the thirds...

Starion


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MoonNeko wrote:OH man xD this is soooooo cute!



X2

At first I saw the fish and was like "flying fish, cool... -_-'" then I saw the girl giggling at the bottom and I cracked up.

Starion


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Re: Something I Must Do



Aww It still gmv though.

Starion


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Re: Bombs Away



Eww! lol

Starion


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Re: Which Way?



GMV; it's not really my style, but it's an amazing design.

bassanimation


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queboy89 wrote:awesome designing. and being asian, this makes my day. bahahahaha.

awesome. thumbs up bass. the entire thread based on your kitten shirt has allowed me to forgo my 5 page paper. and surprisingly, im happier.

trust me, i will keep a look out for your stuff. its even inspirational to me. good luck!



Aww thank you! I'm glad you like it. I wanted to do something a little unusual, so this is what appeared ^^. I love traditional asian dragons.

Oh man..that cat. I'm still suffering the Woot Stigmata wounds over that thing, lol. Glad you took something positive away from it, that is always a win!

AustinMiniMan


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EclecticMuse wrote:Scratch that, my reading comprehension fails.



Yeah... I was really confused for a second. It's all good though... adhering to made up rules is the American way! :-/

Thanks for looking. -Ted

jessicasheu42


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Re: Something I Must Do



the fish remind me of Fish from Chicken little.

i love the msg... however sad.

GMV

Talesin


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hananoheiwa wrote:Very cute idea and illustration. I think it looks a little bland, tho. Maybe a moon or clouds would give visual interest, or making the placement larger and more centered w/o a background would make it seem less floating-off-in-nothing.

Love the way you draw bats.



Thanks.. this was only a partial of the full composition I was planning (a few more bats in the background in various states of balloon-related distress, and some clouds), but was running low on time.
Heh... and floating-off-in-nothing is exactly what it's supposed to look like. Why it's off-center. ;)

fleamarketadict


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Re: Diet Coke Mentos = Rocket



Yeah, copyrights, plus it doesn't fly with the cap on.

An opinion should be the result of thought, not a substitute for it.

bolitb


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EclecticMuse wrote:I thought Star Wars references were banned?



Thank you for your constructive comment on my X-FLight shirt. I have removed it from the derby.

nemosomen


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Flawless89 wrote:Yea, actually you are right. I wasn't sure how to do the half-tone but i'm going to go back and fix it. Thanks for letting me know.



I was thinking this same thing. Double check the size, too, I'm not sure if they print that large of a space.

DirkDDarring


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EclecticMuse wrote:No problem! IMHO stands for In My Humble Opinion.



Txs I feel silly but better to ask then wonder. Good luck on your entries.


Michael Irwin
Graphic artist
www.wix.com/idforu/idforu

kenney9226


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canadianexport77 wrote:don't you think that you would like his designs more if he made one's that we could actually buy....I just think why enter something that you know isn't going to win?



Oh, dear friendly neighbor from the North, I direct you to the historical archives of the shirt derby, way back to derby #15: time travel souvenirs.

You will see that in that week I managed to pull a Marty McFly and return with my winning entry from future derby #387: six packs, with the following triumphant entry:



If you do further research, you will note that at the time I lied about actually winning that derby and that I actually only came in second place. This was even more proof that I brought this back from the future, as at the time of derby #15, only the top vote getter was being published, and second and third place entries were not printed.

Clearly, my trip back from the year 2014 was no joke, as I bought this shirt that was a second place winner on Saturday, December 27, 2014, waited at my home for the smart post delivery, and came back to November 2007 to show everyone my triumphant souvenir from my time travel.

Inspired by my knowledge of my eventual victory in the future, I continue to enter the shirt derby.

Alert readers will also realize that with my obvious proof of eventual shirt derby victory, those who claim that 2012 will be the end of time are clearly proven wrong as well.

Thank you and have a super day, everyone!

atomwhyte


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Re: Something I Must Do



Boots, I LOVE your sense of humor!!!! um...single? ;)

Mekora


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Re: Something I Must Do



it's been a while since I actually voted in a derby but I saw this and couldn't resist. If this prints I'm totally going to get one. GMV

bniehoff22


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egad wrote:I wonder why this hasn't gotten more votes?



It looks like the guy is blowing a major beef nugget out of his rear. That is what I thought when I saw it anyways.

BillyBcool


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Love it.

"Thanks for the memories."

mitchellp


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Re: Lon and Mr. C visit god.



Edgar, Edgar, Edgar... You're way too talented for t-shirt sites.

Tontogoldstein


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Wow... it took me much longer than I thought it would to get this joke... until I focused in on the word Noble. That's hilarious! Then it dawned on me... if I wear this shirt it would be a constant doppler effect of weird stares as people walk toward me then belated laughter after they're about 10 steps behind, i love it!

EclecticMuse


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Starion wrote:X2

At first I saw the fish and was like "flying fish, cool... -_-'" then I saw the girl giggling at the bottom and I cracked up.



Well I hope that was a good cracked up. :D

DirkDDarring


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Re: Diet Coke Mentos = Rocket



Your kidding right? Don't people even read the rules on here or do the just think the owners of the copy rights will over look it cause they are being funny.


Michael Irwin
Graphic artist
www.wix.com/idforu/idforu

crazacool


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This needs to get back in the fog, asap.

MadamAtom


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Re: First Flight



Ohhhh, they're wyverns! Somehow that makes this even cuter. GMV!

rdnielso


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Re: Fail



i wish people would just stop whining when people don't like their designs or trying find loop holes to try and get it rejected...

it's not a video game reference because it appeared in a video game post movie, that's just ignorant...

it is 100% different than the kid falling off the bike in comparison to crashing completely...

and the word FAIL is cancellation and i wouldn't buy it if it was on there...

i voted for this and I will buy it when it goes on sale

kyomushugi


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arparham wrote:Enough with the balloon boy... Do you see the irony in this shirt? There is a camera man chasing it meaning: the guy wants media attention. The shirt, giving the guy attention...



You're reading into it too much.

CSMatt


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Grrr...unfogged. It would be a purchase for me.

CSMatt


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AdderXYU wrote:
I've already noted a number of reasons this is undeniably better than other junk woot has printed. Are they opinions? Sure. But they're based on truths.



Quality post Adder :D I like it.

EclecticMuse


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AustinMiniMan wrote:Yeah... I was really confused for a second. It's all good though... adhering to made up rules is the American way! :-/

Thanks for looking. -Ted



No problem! I'm sorry if I came off as being uptight. If you'd like some concrit, here goes:

Something about the perspective is bugging me. It might be that the lines in the actual illustration are on a slant while the outline is straight, but I dunno.

Also I think it might work better if the edges sort of faded out, instead of being a hard outline. Or alternatively, if you wanted to keep the edges hard, you could try make the illustration area more of a rectangle (panoramic aspect ratio blah blah, I'm scaffolding at getting technical terms across)

Lastly, for the type of illustration I'd probably use solid colors and/or cell shading. But that's just me.

I hope this helps ... I find it more than a little rude and not helpful at all when people just say a design is horrid, and offer no constructive criticism. All it does is tear the artist down and not inspire them to try and better their craft.

bellarific


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I

Re: Fail



just got a big fat paycheck for all my overtime work, so I am BUYIN' THIS, BABY!

YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

EclecticMuse


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DirkDDarring wrote:Txs I feel silly but better to ask then wonder. Good luck on your entries.



Yep, always better to know than go on in awkward confusion. Thanks and good luck to you too!

EclecticMuse


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Re: Diet Coke Mentos = Rocket



My only quibble here (besides the copyright issue) is that it's obvious stock vectors and images were used, and that they weren't cut out properly. You can still see some of the white background in the Coke bottles and the flames.

Otherwise I agree with the poster who said you might want to change the brand names to avoid getting rejected, and consider getting rid of the texture on the Mentos package since you did the same on the bottles.

EclecticMuse


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rdnielso wrote:i wish people would just stop whining when people don't like their designs or trying find loop holes to try and get it rejected...

it's not a video game reference because it appeared in a video game post movie, that's just ignorant...

it is 100% different than the kid falling off the bike in comparison to crashing completely...

and the word FAIL is cancellation and i wouldn't buy it if it was on there...

i voted for this and I will buy it when it goes on sale



I don't know, I still have a little bit of an issue with the obvious reference to a copyrighted property, but that's just me. It's a beautiful design and very funny though.

MadamAtom


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bryozoan wrote:Is Jayne in the sirplane, tossing the money?

*whistles Firefly theme*



I went there too!

rpower75


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banzaaiii wrote:watching the films! why is neither this or the second version in the fog!?!?!
stupid cutesy lovers



Because they are splitting the vote. I don't understand why artists put up two versions. It almost guarantees that they won't print.

benjaminleebates


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mwarrenus wrote:The title was meant to be "Sit and Spin".



Yeah, that would have been good.
I was gonna title it. "I'd like to ride that!"
But the enuendos were too obvious.



cabinboy100


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Re: Sky Fishing


What kind of bait do you use when sky fishing? Bats (aka nightflyers as opposed to nightcrawlers)?

Still frickin sweet and dreamy, still gmv.

brice1981


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rpower75 wrote:Because they are splitting the vote. I don't understand why artists put up two versions. It almost guarantees that they won't print.



Why would it split the votes? It's not like you can only vote for one shirt. If you like both, vote for both. One version is picking up votes that he wouldn't have in the first place. I liked both and voted for both, I do prefer version 2 over version 1, but I would buy either one of them.

BootsBoots


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Re: Something I Must Do



Thanks again for the comments everyone! Sorry the fish don't have fins (anal or otherwise). I was trying to keep things simple and flowing. They're bare-assed, I'm afraid.