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yankeebird wrote:What bothers me, and bothered me about your original entry, is that your fetus is on top of the red bar. Had you moved the baby further up to her belly, the red bar could cross the entire image (as it should).
Even though you didn't get a good reason for your initial rejection, I suspect it was the inclusion of a fetus at crotch-level, which has not changed for this version. If that was it, you could still be rejected again. Birth is generally not a PG-experience, and this may flirt with the line woot sets.
I was unsure how to make the pregnant warning come across so I looked up a few signs and this was actually a cross between two of them, and the bar not going through the circle was off of one of those actual signs. If I was trying to portray birth then I'd have the kid popping out and not 'in the womb'.
Just goes to show what I originally said, there are plenty of warning signs out there, and most of them are common sense and look ridiculous.
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