kylemittskus
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I do not understand the appeal of this shirt AT ALL. It's not creative. It has no joke, no story, no silliness, no anything but "cute."
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ChaosDoctor07
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Re: Blue Ring Love

A blue-ringed octopus shirt!? My pre-Derby prayers have been answered. Good stuff, indeed. Just have a few suggestions:
1) Might just be me, but the head seems just a little bit off on the top portion of the octopus (that is, the part that is coming from the left side to the back).
2) Those jellyfish look rather phallic, to the point of being pretty noticeable. Once you see it (look at the "head" of the jellyfish, you won't be able to unsee it.
That being said, once again, very good job, particularly as your first shot at this kind of thing. I am also particularly pleased that you tied in the "Australia" bit of the theme, rather than just an octopus itself. I highly look forward to seeing any future work you submit to future Derbies.
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inkycatz
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Re: Down Under Mutation

Subtle, wearable - GMV
I'm just hanging out, really.
ChaosDoctor07
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captainassassin wrote:I'm pretty sure this is a "Crocodile Dundee" reference, which falls under pop-culture.
But let's sit back and see if the rejection fairy pays you a visit...
Yeah, I'd have to agree. It's nearly as overt as the other "knife" shirt that was rejected earlier, but it's still relying on the same source. I'd be surprised to not see this one rejected.
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