Sergio37


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Re: School of Force



Awesome Bro!

DJTweekNYC


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Re: Forty-Two U.



Saw this in the pre-derby thread. Nice work. +1

runnerfrog13


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Re: This is not the diploma you are looking for


I like the lightsaber alot, but have some suggestions for the text:

1. "Jedi's" should actually be "Jedis" without the apostrophe. With an apostrophe here it means that whatever comes next in the sentence is something the Jedi owns, without an apostrophe means more than one Jedi, or a team of Jedis.


2. Put University and Coruscant on two lines, one above the other (or one at the top and one on the very bottom of the picture, so they curve into a circle) because it's pretty long right now and the ends will get lost in someone's armpits.


You could get away with just doing #1 and keeping #2 as is, but either way, definitely resubmit a second version!!


wirdou


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I've changed the sentence below cause it was like Fishbiscuit's design. I knew that design but I totally forgot about that sentence, so I removed my entry immediately when someone warned me, and changed the sentence. Hope you like this new version!

grrlmarvel


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Re: Papyrus



I need this in my life.

FloppyKing


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Re: You Shall Pass



I would be very surprised if someone can top this

runnerfrog13


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Re: CYNIC Smart asses 2


You might be able to get away with this one

grrlmarvel


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Re: Undergrad Math



I still want to know where the GRRLMARVEL line is... I know there is one!!

harantula


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Re: Universaurus



soo nice +1!!!






grrlmarvel


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Re: Party-U



I went there!!

harantula


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Sergio37 wrote:Awesome Bro!



totally agree!






harantula


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Re: North College



greaaat!






harantula


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wirdou


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I'm kind of... really in love with philosoraptor right now XD

FloppyKing


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globalbee wrote:Know this might get rejected because of a)copyright or b)'school already exists'... but I thought I'd try anyway



I'm keeping an eye on this one because i had an idea for a shirt that was about a fictional school as well and was not clear on the rule about no "real" schools and i hadn't gotten an answer about it.

runnerfrog13


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Re: Papyrus


I love that the subtitle is in Comic Sans too, HA.

runnerfrog13


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Re: Forty-Two U.


Oh this turned out much better than I expected from the thumbnail! Seeing the whole design really makes it look more like a College/"Property Of" shirt and you did an excellent job adapting it. The distressing is a good amount too, imo, not overdone.

orabbit


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Re: Jedi Academy II



Alternate colorway.

Based on the academy Luke Skywalker founded on Yavin IV 7 years after the events of Return Of The Jedi.

FloppyKing


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Re: Evil School of Evil



If you haven't already used your sixth color (i only count 5) i would suggest making his hair blonder or maybe make his face lighter or something. it looks kind of weird with the hair color being the same as his face.

paaiyan


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runnerfrog13 wrote:I like the lightsaber alot, but have some suggestions for the text:

1. "Jedi's" should actually be "Jedis" without the apostrophe. With an apostrophe here it means that whatever comes next in the sentence is something the Jedi owns, without an apostrophe means more than one Jedi, or a team of Jedis.


2. Put University and Coruscant on two lines, one above the other (or one at the top and one on the very bottom of the picture, so they curve into a circle) because it's pretty long right now and the ends will get lost in someone's armpits.


You could get away with just doing #1 and keeping #2 as is, but either way, definitely resubmit a second version!!



Jedi is both singular and plural. Jedi's or Jedis, both wrong, they are.

Josephus


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Re: Gryffindor



don't griffin's shoulders have wings?

jfsiv


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Re: School of Force



Sweet I wounder if I could take both Jedi, and Sith courses?

runnerfrog13


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Re: Gryffindor


I'd be interested to see too, since it's not exactly real, but it's definitely already in a work of fiction, so "real" in that sense.

About the design - I think the distressing is too much, actually. It is obscuring the design instead of just making it look slightly shabby. I would consider resubbing a less distressed version since it's still early on, whether or not this makes it past the rejectionator

paaiyan


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Re: Papyrus



*twitch*

runnerfrog13


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paaiyan wrote:Jedi is both singular and plural. Jedi's or Jedis, both wrong, they are.


Of course it would have to be one of those awkward words like mice, isn't it...

In that case, change to "Jedi" instead!

runnerfrog13


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Re: Battle School Toon Captain


Wait, weren't the colors for dragon army green and gold?
EDIT: Nope, I was totally off! Gray-Orange-Gray. I would recommend making the yellow/gold more orange, and the gray a bit darker to contrast with the shirt in that case.

runnerfrog13


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Re: Jedi Academy II


Ah, I like this color combo better

flemtone


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Re: Witch Hazel Culinary v2 (with motto)



Great design - needs hairpins.

tjschaeffer


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Re: Evil School of Evil



You know, I tried watching Dr. Horrible before, but couldn't get into it.

I'd be wary of the celebrity likeness rule here.

fuacka


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Re: LIFE v2



A new version in white, I think looks cooler

FloppyKing


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fuacka wrote:A new version in white, I think looks cooler



doesn't a shirt referencing chocolates deserve to be on a brown shirt?

azurefae


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Re: Battle School Toon Captain



I MUST BUY THIS SHIRT.

jupilberry


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Re: There's A Time And A Place...



There's a time and a place for everything, and that's college.

jfsiv


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Re: Zombie U



Cool if it a school that teaches you how to be a zombie them I wound take Nemesis 101. Because he is by far one of the coolest zombie I know.

jfsiv


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Re: Jedi Academy Curriculum



Cool I think I would take

*Introduction to Land Speeders 102
*Speeder Bike Chase & Evasion Tactics 302

and lastly

*Harnessing the Force 401

tjschaeffer


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Re: You Shall Pass



Rejected... This was so great. Sad face.

paaiyan


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Re: Battle School Toon Captain



0.0

WANTWANTWANT!

Meggin


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Re: Qo'nos University



Hey guys, I'm still fairly Derby-dumb - was I rejected because of the bat'leth? I know there's another Klingon shirt in the running, and that's all I can figure to be hitting the Rejectionator's buttons.

Thanks!