oakenspirit


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tomspc wrote:At first glance, I liked the "problems" version BUT "trouble brewing" sold me on the "trouble" version.



THIS




maybe TRouble Free for the first one


tomspc


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ApeLad wrote:Here's what I've got:

know your bones by Ape Lad, on Flickr



A lot of text, I think it might be hard to read on a shirt or you'll have people staring at your chest for far too long.

tomspc


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Mavyn wrote:
And, dibs on 'pie chart showing how much of the internet is cats'.


There wouldn't be a lot of slices on that pie.

Mavyn


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omarfeliciano wrote:I have this, but can't decide on the copy. Can you guys help?



I like Trouble Brewing as well. the text for Latte is better, but the beverage doesn't look like a latte.

My speech is not parsing. I am speaking in ellipsis.

tomspc


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oakenspirit wrote:
maybe TRouble Free for the first one



Agree, "Trouble Free" is better

orabbit


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omarfeliciano wrote:I have this, but can't decide on the copy. Can you guys help?



Trouble version made me chuckle. Maybe "trouble free"?

edit - hadn't gotten to page 2 yet. GMTA!

orabbit


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Navy or gray?



cdrewlow


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orabbit wrote:Navy or gray?



I vote navy.

oakenspirit


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orabbit wrote:Navy or gray?




I want to like the navy better but the grey seems to work more overall...

So cool man- I'd buy this in a heartbeat


lotsofgoats


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[j5]Make your totally-not-a-lightsaber look less totally-like-a-sex-toy.[/j5]


oakenspirit


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orabbit wrote:Navy or gray?




Needs NEVER SAY DIE!


orabbit


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oakenspirit wrote:Needs NEVER SAY DIE!



I had it in the draft, but I didn't like it as much. I didn't think it worked without "Goonies", and I didn't want to put titles on it.

lotsofgoats


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I think the Indy reference is cool and pretty dang clever, but I think you should break up some of the bigger words into more steps.


Agreed on "Goonies" being the most important part of the aforementioned phrase, as well as the decision to look elsewhere.

Mavyn


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orabbit wrote:Navy or gray?



Navy.

My speech is not parsing. I am speaking in ellipsis.

tomspc


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orabbit wrote:Navy or gray?



I prefer the gray.

suggestions:
"I'll be back"
"be afraid, be very afraid"
"If it bleeds, we can kill it"
"I feel the need, the need for speed"

orhplus


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orabbit wrote:Navy or gray?



Navy !

orabbit


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OK, does this look more or less like a marital appliance? RE: Indy quote, I had it that way but it hurt readability. Tomspc, I like the Arnie quotes - I had a few on the list, but they didn't make the cut. I really wanted to use "It's not a tumor", but that came out in 1990. I'll save it for part 2.

omarfeliciano


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Thanks for the feedback guys, You rock!

I think "Trouble Free" is great.

How about now?

Mavyn


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omarfeliciano wrote:Thanks for the feedback guys, You rock!

I think "Trouble Free" is great.

How about now?



I like the color change to make it look more latte-ish. Yay!

My speech is not parsing. I am speaking in ellipsis.

lotsofgoats


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orabbit wrote:marital appliance


ಡ⌣ಡ

Less, definitely.

omarfeliciano


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Mavyn wrote:I like the color change to make it look more latte-ish. Yay!



Of course. It was a good suggestion.

How about a last pun?

j5


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lotsofgoats wrote:[j5]Make your totally-not-a-lightsaber look less totally-like-a-sex-toy.[/j5]



get outta my heed.

move along

mjc613


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j5 wrote:Blast!
Scraps design.



YOu do realize that there are people who don't read this thread who submit designs. They don't know who has called dibs on what.

I recommend you continue with your design (if you weren't joking), since it may come out totally different.

Mavyn


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mjc613 wrote:YOu do realize that there are people who don't read this thread who submit designs. They don't know who has called dibs on what.

I recommend you continue with your design (if you weren't joking), since it may come out totally different.



I was joking.

j5 was joking.

ha ha ha

My speech is not parsing. I am speaking in ellipsis.

orabbit


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omarfeliciano wrote:Of course. It was a good suggestion.

How about a last pun?



Nah, quit while you're ahead. Unless maybe Grounds for Objection or something?

apalooza


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Mavyn wrote:I was joking.

j5 was joking.

ha ha ha



I call dibs on Schrödinger's cat. Procrastination too. You hear that Fishbicuit? Procrastination. Mine.

Please vote for my derby entry this week:
http://shirt.woot.com/derby/entry/77900/tis-but-a-scratch

tjschaeffer


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omarfeliciano wrote:Of course. It was a good suggestion.

How about a last pun?



I like it more without the top line...

tjschaeffer


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orabbit wrote:Navy or gray?





This. Navy.

ambergreen


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tjschaeffer wrote:This. Navy.



Navy, and it will be hard not to click the buy button when it comes up...That and apelad's. I don't care about the too much text, it's too much humor.

babeinthewoods


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First time submitting to the Derby. Hope I'm doing it right. Fingers crossed!

taternuggets


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babeinthewoods wrote:First time submitting to the Derby. Hope I'm doing it right. Fingers crossed!



God help you if you do it wrong.


j/k


Nothing follows.

CarterW


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ApeLad wrote:Here's what I've got:

know your bones by Ape Lad, on Flickr



This is amazing! I must have it!

tomspc


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babeinthewoods wrote:First time submitting to the Derby. Hope I'm doing it right. Fingers crossed!



Saying a prayer, doing the rosary, sprinkling holy water, making the sign of the cross, throwing in some frankincense and myrrh. OK...good luck and God bless. I've done all I can.

omarfeliciano


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tomspc wrote:Saying a prayer, doing the rosary, sprinkling holy water, making the sign of the cross, throwing in some frankincense and myrrh. OK...good luck and God bless. I've done all I can.



And don't piss BlueTuba, lol

tomspc


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omarfeliciano wrote:And don't piss BlueTuba, lol


Amen. I might have to give Bluetuba an exorcism this week. It might even require a wooden stake or a silver bullet, not sure which.

babeinthewoods


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Thanks for the prayers and any incantations of luck! ;)

One point of confusion that I have:
The ShirtComp/Detail files vs the posted derby image...
Do I submit the ShirtComp/Detail files seperately and Woot puts them together... or do I put them together and submit the image that gets posted?

Just not sure, since I see so many Derby entries that show the ShirtComp on the Detail image.

babeinthewoods


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babeinthewoods wrote:Thanks for the prayers and any incantations of luck! ;)

One point of confusion that I have:
The ShirtComp/Detail files vs the posted derby image...
Do I submit the ShirtComp/Detail files seperately and Woot puts them together... or do I put them together and submit the image that gets posted?

Just not sure, since I see so many Derby entries that show the ShirtComp on the Detail image.



Ah... I think I see it all clearly now. (Some clarifications on the submission page that I missed.)

Will have to adjust things when I get home. This office computer can't handle the files.

bluetuba


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Oh c'mon, I'm cracking jokes alot more often than I'm being cranky. If you guys think I'M mean then the standards have changed alot since the regular critics stopped coming around. :P

*hiss*

tomspc


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bluetuba wrote:Oh c'mon, I'm cracking jokes alot more often than I'm being cranky. If you guys think I'M mean then the standards have changed alot since the regular critics stopped coming around. :P

*hiss*



Glad to see that the Midol is working for you :P

orabbit


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bluetuba wrote:Oh c'mon, I'm cracking jokes alot more often than I'm being cranky. If you guys think I'M mean then the standards have changed alot since the regular critics stopped coming around. :P

*hiss*



I appreciate you.