stevegoll68 wrote:Wow. Floundering at the bottom. Any constructive criticism for this one, folks?
Not that I'm doing so much better this derby, but you asked...
I personally don't think it's that strong a design. The concept is hard to connect with, and although I know the source, and I know "meh", I don't see how they relate (or anti-relate). Maybe if there was an illustration or something to relay this better?
I don't care for the color choice for the words -- they get lost in the flowers with a lack of contrast, and the typography itself needs work (like why is the middle line wider? And if that was intentional, why isn't it MUCH wider?).
Finally, the 4 flowers on each corner frames the whole thing in not a good way -- that level of consistency -- approximately the same size, color balance and layout, all contribute to a not very interesting design. I tend to find asymmetry, 3s and 5s, work better than even numbers when doing this kind of thing.
Hope that helps. One opinion, anyway. Remember, and I know this as well as anyone, they can't all be winners, no matter how much you like it. See what gets the most votes and decide for yourself what could be improved.