anishell wrote:"Luke it's me! Your father!", said the Darth Vader.
"Noooooo!!", said the young Skywalker.
Poor Darth Vader. The last thing he ever wanted was to show his only son that he can be a hero...
Shirt design with 6 colors
Originally I was gonna include Luke but then I decided against it even though I really think it would be nice. But since this submission was in late in the derby, I thought I send it now than submit a later version. If I have time, maybe I'll post the finished version…
Any thoughts are appreciated!
Sounds like you're looking for some feedback?
- Stylistically, it's pretty good. The treatment is similar to other artists here so in general, you're in good shape
- Star Wars kills around here, so you've picked a popular subject to start.
- I think the design needs more context. I don't really get the narrative, nor do I understand why DV is wearing a Mario mask and holding a flower. Honestly, I don't even follow the comment you made above.
- IMO, the single, vertical character on the shirt is not a great layout. I think this can be resolved with more context (as noted above) and a more thoughtful placement and/or characters.
Hope that helps! Welcome to the derby (I noticed that's spelled incorrectly in your signature, BTW), and feel free to ask questions as you get rolling. Good luck!