theinfinityloop wrote:I love that both of you see the things you mention here. Thanks for these great comments!
I also appreciate the comments about not quite liking the smoke/mist/cloud (I think I'm going to call it mist.) To be honest, I think it's a bit overpowering as well. It's just that halftones have a bad habit of annoying me. I think if I had more time to tweak this, I would add just some subtle halftones on the edge of the mist near the building to show some depth, and I might accentuate the dragonish shape of it. I have to admit though it might be fun to leave it subtle to make people give it a double take.
Anyway, thanks for all the votes and comments!
I like things like this that are open to interpretation. I can make up my own "story" for it as I please.
I'm not overly fond of the things that you only understand completely if you know the backstory on it. If it's something well known, that's fine, but I don't want to have to study sixth century poetry in the original language to understand what's printed on a tee shirt.
On the other hand, I'm unlikely to buy a shirt with a picture that needs no interpretation, unless there's some personal meaning for me. So I might wear a shirt with a Micky Mouse logo if I just came back from Disneyland, but I wouldn't go buy one in Detroit.
This one is understandable on a quick glance -- it's gothic, there's a gargoyle -- but if you keep looking, it's not just a rendering of some existing building, it's a story that's about to unfold.
I really like the mist the way it is. It's not just mist, and it's not a big honkin' dragon that would become the focus of the piece. It could just be a random mist, or five minutes ago, it might have been a dragon that is now turning into mist so it can go elsewhere. Or it could be mist gathering to become a dragon. Or maybe it's just a very strange rain cloud.
The whole thing is an event in progress, instead of just being a static snapshot of something that has no life. And that's what makes it interesting.
And since it doesn't reference anything in particular, there's no wrong interpretation. So if I see a dragon and a happy gargoyle and the next person sees smoke and a gargoyle about to burst into flames, neither of us is wrong.
Too many words for a mere tee shirt? Maybe. But this one does tell a story.