Derby #39: Motion
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Screaming Rain

Screaming Rain
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eHalcyon


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Re: Screaming Rain


I like it, though perhaps it would work better on a blue shirt? It's raining, after all. But it does look good on lemon!

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kkho


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eHalcyon wrote:I like it, though perhaps it would work better on a blue shirt? It's raining, after all. But it does look good on lemon!


I actually like it with lemon, it's really cute! GMV! =D

yakitori


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eHalcyon wrote:I like it, though perhaps it would work better on a blue shirt? It's raining, after all. But it does look good on lemon!


Thanks for the feedback. I was thinking blue as well for the background but I thought it would make it harder to see the drops.

jbedwar1


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yakitori wrote:Thanks for the feedback. I was thinking blue as well for the background but I thought it would make it harder to see the drops.


I like the cloud's expression, but i think the raindrops would work better if they had more of an angry expression than a scared one. And maybe some scars or something to make them look like soldiers (not that raindrops could have scars). I think that would be cool.

ashley87


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jbedwar1 wrote:I like the cloud's expression, but i think the raindrops would work better if they had more of an angry expression than a scared one. And maybe some scars or something to make them look like soldiers (not that raindrops could have scars). I think that would be cool.


But they're scared because they're going to splatter on the hard ground after a gigantic fall. I would certainly be scared, heh.

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