Derby #40: Motherhood
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No dessert until you finish your people!

No dessert until you finish your people!
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zewkin


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This is a redesign of one I submitted for the Nutrition derby. I don't know about anyone else but I remember sitting at the kitchen table until 10pm at night because my mom wouldn't let me leave or have any dessert without finishing my broccoli. Strangely, broccoli is now one of my favorite vegetables. Who knew?

ilstu99


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I think you gotta connect it to mom somehow. Just being something that a mom might say hasn't been enough so far.

cheapojoe


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ilstu99 wrote:I think you gotta connect it to mom somehow. Just being something that a mom might say hasn't been enough so far.


I agree with ilstu99, the message may be too subtle. Maybe have a Mother Broccoli on the other side of the plate scorning the other broccoli. Just a thought. Still, I wouldn't comment on the design if I didn't think it was clever and original. Nice work!

mjc613


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zewkin wrote:This is a redesign of one I submitted for the Nutrition derby. I don't know about anyone else but I remember sitting at the kitchen table until 10pm at night because my mom wouldn't let me leave or have any dessert without finishing my broccoli. Strangely, broccoli is now one of my favorite vegetables. Who knew?


I ate my broccoli. I REFUSED however to eat my liver.

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