Derby #41: Alphabet

Babel

Rejected because: Duplicate letters, I guess

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tjflashman77


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I'd like to be able to see it. I'm sure I won't be the only one. Maybe post a detail photo or two here in the comments section?

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tjflashman77 wrote:I'd like to be able to see it. I'm sure I won't be the only one. Maybe post a detail photo or two here in the comments section?


You're not the only one. It looks like it might be really cool... like Raven a few weeks ago. Can you post a larger image, please?

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kwilder


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Is that all text? If so, it is very likely that letters are repeating and therefore would be violating the rules. However, a detail image showing the smaller lines (perhaps they are just lines, not small text) would be helpful?

mjc613


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This drawing is a great idea for this derby. Unfortunately, the gray on gray is very reminiscent of sweat. Not visually appealling to me.

tjflashman77


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I'm not being a jerk, or at least not intending to be, but how do you manage 8 votes without people being able to see the shirt?

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kar131313


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You have repeated letters even in the bits I can read, so I think that disqualifies the design. I am curious about what the design is though - post a zoom, if you would. It does look a bit like a sweat line...

eHalcyon


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kar131313 wrote:You have repeated letters even in the bits I can read, so I think that disqualifies the design. I am curious about what the design is though - post a zoom, if you would. It does look a bit like a sweat line...


The subject is in the title. It's supposed to be the Tower of Babel.

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