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Stand by your Spider Man! (Corrected Version 2)

Stand by your Spider Man!   (Corrected Version 2)
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DavidShenoda


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Re: Stand by your Spider Man! (Corrected Version 2)


Here's another version with some corrections/additions.
Spider is actually a spider, not a hairy one though - ewwww.
Added a front line line ready to fire with GUNS to all the ant sections

christermime


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Re: Stand by your Spider Man! (Corrected Version 2)


I think this one reads much clearer. Good job!

omnitarian


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Definitely improved. Best of luck with this one.

Kilagria


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DavidShenoda wrote:Here's another version with some corrections/additions.
Spider is actually a spider, not a hairy one though - ewwww.
Added a front line line ready to fire with GUNS to all the ant sections


Still should get rid of the middle section (of the spider) but it's an exellent improvement!

AdderXYU


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Do you have ideas that aren't based off of copyrighted characters?

haxrox


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AdderXYU wrote:Do you have ideas that aren't based off of copyrighted characters?

You should check out his latest entry. And here are some links on how to bring about change in a way that won't just trigger emotional repulsion to your words. There's less devastating wit to be displayed, but maybe it'll work better than your usual methods

DavidShenoda


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haxrox wrote:You should check out his latest entry. And here are some links on how to bring about change in a way that won't just trigger emotional repulsion to your words. There's less devastating wit to be displayed, but maybe it'll work better than your usual methods


Ah, your patience never ceases to amaze. Thanks for havin' my back.

sharptoothpiranha


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Cool design! Brings back memories of all my missing in action GI Joes who didn't come back due to lack of representation. Great job gmv.

OnyxEyez


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I like this one much better than your other one - I got this was a spider right away.

Woot: x 41
Shirt.Woot: x 41
Sellout.Woot: x 11
Kids.Woot: x 4
Wine.Woot: x none. Wine gives me migraines. I'll take the cheese tho.

moran31


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I was actually looking for the other one you did, 'Corn Dog', great job either way.
Mine was 'Baldness',check mine out at the bottom, but, just wanted to say you have some talent. Good Job!

ersamia


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much better than previous. great.

thatrobert


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