Derby #74: One Continuous Line
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An Incomplete Zebra Resub (Complete Version)

An Incomplete Zebra Resub (Complete Version)
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DavidShenoda


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Second Version on white - how I originally planned. Also, line is corrected, and the eye is now a more sucky, yet unambiguously rule compliant, line segment.

choptop82


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DavidShenoda wrote:Second Version on white - how I originally planned. Also, line is corrected, and the eye is now a more sucky, yet unambiguously rule compliant, line segment.


Hey, it may not be as satisfying, but at least it's compliant. I'd love to see some sort of tut on how you planned out your lines.

IG64Assassin


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DavidShenoda wrote:Second Version on white - how I originally planned. Also, line is corrected, and the eye is now a more sucky, yet unambiguously rule compliant, line segment.


Erg, sorry, but this is still breaking the rules. I know you did your best to double check, but unfortunately it's still not fixed. Here, instead of trying to explain it I just highlighted it: http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/530/zebrasubmd6.jpg

The red part appears to be a separate segment, and the blue part appears to be a fork in the line (which I'm not sure is allowed or not). I thought I'd point this out quickly since you just resubbed it.

It is a cool design though, I'd like to see what you could do without all of the constraints.

Also for some reason to me it looks kind of... sporty? Maybe it's the white.

DavidShenoda


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IG64Assassin wrote:Erg, sorry, but this is still breaking the rules. I know you did your best to double check, but unfortunately it's still not fixed. Here, instead of trying to explain it I just highlighted it: http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/530/zebrasubmd6.jpg

The red part appears to be a separate segment, and the blue part appears to be a fork in the line (which I'm not sure is allowed or not). I thought I'd point this out quickly since you just resubbed it.

It is a cool design though, I'd like to see what you could do without all of the constraints.

Also for some reason to me it looks kind of... sporty? Maybe it's the white.


I originally drew it in photoshop, but I traced with illustrator to clean up edges and smooth it out. I guess when I vectorized it some of the really small gaps connected. Oh well, it doesn't have a shot anyway. Thanks for taking the time to trace it.

Conrads


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fofmock


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This is a great design, and entirely unique from most all of the other entries because of its unique use of line thickness. Also, if you do try to resub again, other than the spots mentioned on http://img68.imageshack.us/img68/530/zebrasubmd6.jpg , the top of the Z kind of splits off and then rejoins, that may not pass either.

moran31


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Love your work mang! i like this one too. youz gotz da gift! nicely done with all of yours, how many submitz you do? few people I wait for week to week and you are one of them.

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