Derby #84: The Sea
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Compulsion

Compulsion
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freericecars


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So yeah....

My second submission, hopefully it does a little better my last one!

This shirt is a contemplation on the compulsive nature of humans, The position of humankind in nature, and really big teeth.

Krygore


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I love the idea, but the art needs work. If you fleshed out the shadow of the angler fish more, and showed some highlights from the glow on the teeth (I only see it on the eyes, it looks disjointed), I think this would be a winning design.

cptobvious


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Congratulations! You've won the award for CptObvious' favorite emerging artist!

Keep it up kid

databit


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Don't go towards the light!

freericecars


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Krygore wrote:I love the idea, but the art needs work. If you fleshed out the shadow of the angler fish more, and showed some highlights from the glow on the teeth (I only see it on the eyes, it looks disjointed), I think this would be a winning design.


Woohoo! Thanks for the advice, I am truly just learning the basics of Illustrator/Photoshop.

coolayers64


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Krygore wrote:I love the idea, but the art needs work. If you fleshed out the shadow of the angler fish more, and showed some highlights from the glow on the teeth (I only see it on the eyes, it looks disjointed), I think this would be a winning design.


Second'd. The diver seems a little plain, he needs more detail.

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