Derby #119: Flight
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Fly Smarter...

Fly Smarter...
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eenglade


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What a weird idea - which is good. But I don't think that balloon is going to last long...

hananoheiwa


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Very cute idea and illustration. I think it looks a little bland, tho. Maybe a moon or clouds would give visual interest, or making the placement larger and more centered w/o a background would make it seem less floating-off-in-nothing.

Love the way you draw bats.

Talesin


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hananoheiwa wrote:Very cute idea and illustration. I think it looks a little bland, tho. Maybe a moon or clouds would give visual interest, or making the placement larger and more centered w/o a background would make it seem less floating-off-in-nothing.

Love the way you draw bats.


Thanks.. this was only a partial of the full composition I was planning (a few more bats in the background in various states of balloon-related distress, and some clouds), but was running low on time.
Heh... and floating-off-in-nothing is exactly what it's supposed to look like. Why it's off-center. ;)

bvillarreal


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Talesin wrote:Thanks.. this was only a partial of the full composition I was planning (a few more bats in the background in various states of balloon-related distress, and some clouds), but was running low on time.
Heh... and floating-off-in-nothing is exactly what it's supposed to look like. Why it's off-center. ;)


Awesome dynamic tension! Would have loved to see the rest, but I like just the one - GMV

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